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4/6/2013 c1 22afern36
Great descriptions! I can really feel the pain from the character. There are a few mistakes, however. My life is a shambles should be in shambles. Just minor things such as that. The writing itself though, was very good.
3/25/2013 c1 14R.K. Iris
Wow. This is powerful, so powerful, and so very well written. I connected with this really well 'cause one of my characters happens to have suffered through the same thing-it's like watching another, similar story unfold, but this time, I'm the spectator, not the creator. This really connects to the heart-I've read nearly all that you've put up on this site, and your work has the power to connect with the reader's heart, it's that brilliant.
This was really powerful, and a fantastic read.

R. K. Iris.
11/25/2012 c1 18FreekyDisaster18
Your description is simple and yet extremely effective. You can feel your leads pain and agony which is always a sign of great writing. Brilliant beginning.

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