for Raindrops12/14/2013 c1 Snowyncess
I always love poems of hurt & sadness.. It's great combining it with the mood when it's raining.. Good work:)
I always love poems of hurt & sadness.. It's great combining it with the mood when it's raining.. Good work:)
1/13/2013 c1 
51Luna's Child
Wow, this was a very powerful poem! I loved the way you described the sadness and hurt the character felt. I also liked how you started the poem with a sad mood but at the end you made it appear it the character accepted what happened and is willing to start over. Great job!
51Luna's ChildWow, this was a very powerful poem! I loved the way you described the sadness and hurt the character felt. I also liked how you started the poem with a sad mood but at the end you made it appear it the character accepted what happened and is willing to start over. Great job!