for Mr Nice Guy12/11/2012 c1 CallMePie
I fangirled on the last bit. asdfghjkl;' You, are, AMAZING! 3
I fangirled on the last bit. asdfghjkl;' You, are, AMAZING! 3
12/1/2012 c2 
4Melody Hallows
You're quit good with humor. I'm not usually one for realistic fiction but I think I can take a detour on my normal fantasy/sci fi boat for this. Sometimes your composition of things is a bit choppy and confusing. The confusing bit could be worked out easily I think, and the choppy-well it's a great tool for humor if you know how to work it. Keep it up! I want more o3o
4Melody HallowsYou're quit good with humor. I'm not usually one for realistic fiction but I think I can take a detour on my normal fantasy/sci fi boat for this. Sometimes your composition of things is a bit choppy and confusing. The confusing bit could be worked out easily I think, and the choppy-well it's a great tool for humor if you know how to work it. Keep it up! I want more o3o