
7/25/2013 c1
23Gravind Divine
This is amazing! I love it! It's great! It creates a complexity that I cant help but wonder about! It's really good! Good job!

This is amazing! I love it! It's great! It creates a complexity that I cant help but wonder about! It's really good! Good job!
11/29/2012 c1
12Honeyybee234
The short sentences you used are very effective and give the poem an edge that I can't quite describe. But its a good thing though :) I liked it x

The short sentences you used are very effective and give the poem an edge that I can't quite describe. But its a good thing though :) I liked it x