for His Spongebob Boxers4/12/2021 c1 mssarahadams057
For such a great story, a lot of audience must read your book. You can publish your work on NovelStar Mobile App. Also, I am sharing your book in Facebook to help reach readers.
For such a great story, a lot of audience must read your book. You can publish your work on NovelStar Mobile App. Also, I am sharing your book in Facebook to help reach readers.
5/15/2015 c1 
8theBatmanisShakakah
You are the Master. Do you know what is awesome about this oneshot? You have shown three completely different guys with completely different personalities and with completely different emotional/physical relationships with the MC and done it in 5,000 words. WHISLT (not finished) making the MC a likeable character and not some indecisive flirtatious girl. WHISLT the MC has a best friend relationship with another girl that is completely realistic, unforced and comical. I wish I were more eloquent but I'm just gonna say it how it is - you've done a DAMN good job.
8theBatmanisShakakahYou are the Master. Do you know what is awesome about this oneshot? You have shown three completely different guys with completely different personalities and with completely different emotional/physical relationships with the MC and done it in 5,000 words. WHISLT (not finished) making the MC a likeable character and not some indecisive flirtatious girl. WHISLT the MC has a best friend relationship with another girl that is completely realistic, unforced and comical. I wish I were more eloquent but I'm just gonna say it how it is - you've done a DAMN good job.
3/30/2015 c1 Red
Loved the story! Very well written! xx
Loved the story! Very well written! xx
3/21/2013 c1 lady A
it's good. I'm smiling from the beginning till the end. and yeah, the 'tall, dark and dense' is priceless. :))
it's good. I'm smiling from the beginning till the end. and yeah, the 'tall, dark and dense' is priceless. :))
3/2/2013 c1 D
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1/8/2013 c1 Guest
I love love love it!
I love love love it!
12/17/2012 c1 9The Rocket Scientist
BUT IT'S SO ADORABLE AND WELL-WRITTEN AND LOVELY ALL AROUND THAT I'M VOMITING RAINBOWS, WHICH IS ACTUALLY, A GOOD, GOOD, GOOD THING!:3
Though I think that I caught a typo up there-
"Mason left, and so did Darcy, since she needed to call her parents and give them a play-by-play of the tournament."
I think that Marina was the one who followed Mason in leaving.:D
Anyhow, I'm so much in love with your writing, y'know. And Darcy's such a perfect name for her. I'm definitely looking forward to reading your works!
9The Rocket ScientistBUT IT'S SO ADORABLE AND WELL-WRITTEN AND LOVELY ALL AROUND THAT I'M VOMITING RAINBOWS, WHICH IS ACTUALLY, A GOOD, GOOD, GOOD THING!:3
Though I think that I caught a typo up there-
"Mason left, and so did Darcy, since she needed to call her parents and give them a play-by-play of the tournament."
I think that Marina was the one who followed Mason in leaving.:D
Anyhow, I'm so much in love with your writing, y'know. And Darcy's such a perfect name for her. I'm definitely looking forward to reading your works!
12/11/2012 c1 Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling
I absolutely adore the ending. XD It's cute to perfection and amazingly adorable.
I absolutely adore the ending. XD It's cute to perfection and amazingly adorable.
12/9/2012 c1 5GlassTongues
Awwww! That was so cute! I'm just like Darcy; I give total strangers elaborate back stories, and then get disappointed when they turn out to be totally different!
Great story!
5GlassTonguesAwwww! That was so cute! I'm just like Darcy; I give total strangers elaborate back stories, and then get disappointed when they turn out to be totally different!
Great story!
12/4/2012 c1 1Alinka
I like the phrase you wrote on the story, the one you wrote "tall, dark, and dense". I laughed out loud in my class, disturbing my classmates XD thanks for the laughs
1AlinkaI like the phrase you wrote on the story, the one you wrote "tall, dark, and dense". I laughed out loud in my class, disturbing my classmates XD thanks for the laughs
12/4/2012 c1 Ngoc1231
Aww this was really cute! And so many quotable lines.. No lie. Landon is cute. I think after a walk to remember, that name will be forever deemed as an amazing person in my book haha. Austin was creepy as heck. And I'm really happy about how it ended. I was a bit torn in the middle about who I wanted Darcy to end up with. And I also thought a first that Darcy was just Marina messing around with her calling her that cus of Pride and Prejudice. But it's a cute name after all. I'm surprised he ran though with his undies. And I wonder how Marina is gonna be when she sees the video haha.
Love the story!
*Ngoc1231*
Aww this was really cute! And so many quotable lines.. No lie. Landon is cute. I think after a walk to remember, that name will be forever deemed as an amazing person in my book haha. Austin was creepy as heck. And I'm really happy about how it ended. I was a bit torn in the middle about who I wanted Darcy to end up with. And I also thought a first that Darcy was just Marina messing around with her calling her that cus of Pride and Prejudice. But it's a cute name after all. I'm surprised he ran though with his undies. And I wonder how Marina is gonna be when she sees the video haha.
Love the story!
*Ngoc1231*