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287ArchiaHaha, this made me laugh. It all works somehow, all the rhyme still makes sense which I think is pretty good. It's all a bit random but none of the lines are absolutely random. Great funny poem.
12/1/2012 c1 70NaverHmm.. It was slightly funny, I sort of understand, I think.
11/30/2012 c1 30hal99ha ha! I like it!
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