4/7/2013 c1 3Daisy Ink
It's an interesting start. I just wish it was longer.

3/11/2013 c4 1JazzApples
So I have just been reading this as a spur-of-the-moment thing to refresh my memory of what is going on, and I must say that this needs more views (and I am not being biased). Maybe sweep for grammar and capitalization errors and this will be perfect (loving the use of foreshadowing in this chapter that I have only just noted). Overall, loving the story, hoping I will be able to follow the rest judging from what I have been told.
-JazzApples.

1/22/2013 c2 silly lily sweet
Hey babe, I love the beginning! Haha that part was completely true! You should get me involed more init! Xxxx this is sooo good! You need to do more chapters!

12/12/2012 c1 3yellowmice
*piqued
"I'm glad no-one was about." - did we make it italic? I can't remember...