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5/23/2013 c1 5Y. S. Wong
You! It's you! I've heard a lot about you, fellow writer with letters for a given name. But being the rebel that I am, I shall read not Ishiki, but this!

Oho, so it's a gathering quest type story. Gotta say, not necessarily the most original type of plot, but hey, it's all about execution. So far, I don't have much to say on plot since it's just the prologue and this is basically just a plop of backstory, but it's interesting nonetheless.

What intrigued me the most was actually the description you put up. Sounds like you've got quite the motley crew of characters lined up, so I shall press forward to see what they're like!
12/11/2012 c2 ChocoMaw
Wow I am really enjoying your story. I am looking forward the next chapter
12/11/2012 c1 ChocoMaw
Hello TK Anez, once I started I could not stop reading too. It is really a simple and fascinating prologue, how could I say ? It shows that you know where you are going and that you built your own world. Nice prologue,I am going to read Chapter II and I have no doubt it will be a great pleasure ;) Thank you
12/7/2012 c2 2lazysleep
Nice. -
12/6/2012 c2 11cool sapc
Yay! I finally finished this chapter! It's great, and I really like Tak. :)
12/5/2012 c2 2Miss Miya
I'm really enjoying this, update! :)
12/4/2012 c1 2c'estquatre
The prologue sounds something Zelda like, an almost fey, fantasy, RPG type opening. If that's what you're going for, great, all in all, it sounds like one of those histories that are recorded on stone tablets and showing in the prologue and serves as foreshadowing.
Yea, but the second chapter's formatting makes it hard to read...
12/4/2012 c1 11cool sapc
O.O Ooh... this looks good! Can't wait to read the next part!

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