for A Pirate's Life For Me12/20/2012 c3 Charlotte
Omg, I love this so much! Ohhh, you write brilliantly, ofcourse, but these characters are just so awesome, I can tell this story is going to be a great one!
Omg, I love this so much! Ohhh, you write brilliantly, ofcourse, but these characters are just so awesome, I can tell this story is going to be a great one!
12/9/2012 c3 KillaCupcakes
I love this! It's a good mix of action and romance. Aurora is a feisty heroine, which I really like, and Harry sounds like my kind of guy. I hope you update soon.
I love this! It's a good mix of action and romance. Aurora is a feisty heroine, which I really like, and Harry sounds like my kind of guy. I hope you update soon.
12/2/2012 c1 Charlotte
Omg Hannah how do you do this, really? This is amazing and I already love Aurora and am looking forward to what's next! Love! xxx
Omg Hannah how do you do this, really? This is amazing and I already love Aurora and am looking forward to what's next! Love! xxx
12/2/2012 c1 
23Krystal Watters
"– there had been a chill when the Commodore had entered" - Do you mean "there was a chilly draft" when he entered? The wording is just a bit ambiguous.
I got the impression that this was all happening in the morning... so why would the Commodore be worried about noises in the middle of the day?
A good start. I was confused at why a proper young woman would turn so murderous, but there's a nice hint in the third to last paragraph, even though I do thing that the wording of it could be a little better.
And one note: there was no such thing as marital rape during this time. It was a man's right to take what he wanted from his wife, whether she liked it or not. Because of this I'm not sure that Aurora would describe her situation as "rape."
23Krystal Watters"– there had been a chill when the Commodore had entered" - Do you mean "there was a chilly draft" when he entered? The wording is just a bit ambiguous.
I got the impression that this was all happening in the morning... so why would the Commodore be worried about noises in the middle of the day?
A good start. I was confused at why a proper young woman would turn so murderous, but there's a nice hint in the third to last paragraph, even though I do thing that the wording of it could be a little better.
And one note: there was no such thing as marital rape during this time. It was a man's right to take what he wanted from his wife, whether she liked it or not. Because of this I'm not sure that Aurora would describe her situation as "rape."