6/18/2013 c1 13Revamp
While I prefer KanaToru I have a new appreciation for this couple. They have an interesting dynamic between them.

I loved this and despite it being your first yaoi it was descriptive and well-written. It was also realistic, which a lot of yaoi tend to miss on certain marks.

The power struggle was well played and gave thier intimate moment a sense of action. Great little one shot.