for Still Here1/27/2013 c1 
24Sarah-Brighteyes
I like how you drew into yourself to picture yourself when you are older! I love the last line. Good write!
24Sarah-BrighteyesI like how you drew into yourself to picture yourself when you are older! I love the last line. Good write!
12/14/2012 c1 173Little girl Big world
I like this! My favorite lines were "I'm not sure this body even belongs to me
I close my eyes and I feel my youth" Great job and a very interesting idea for a poem.
173Little girl Big worldI like this! My favorite lines were "I'm not sure this body even belongs to me
I close my eyes and I feel my youth" Great job and a very interesting idea for a poem.