for The Middle12/2/2020 c30 CovertEyes
Well, this was kind of cute, but it has some major problems. I don't know how this has so many positive reviews.
1. Wesley doesn't have bipolar disorder, he has serious anger issues. I hate that his tantrums were excused by carelessly slapping the term "bipolar" on him. Bipolar disorder is so much more than mood swings.
2. One dose of chemotherapy doesn't immediately mean you lose your hair.
3. Did Kat really have her cast removed after a couple of DAYS? *eyeroll*
4. Imagine being knocked on the head, kidnapped, and then threatened by someone with a gun. Then imagine your ex boyfriend dripping with sweat and blood tackling you (to save you, sure) and laying on top of you... With all his sweat and blood dripping onto you. Would your hormones really overpower the adrenaline? Would you REALLY want him to kiss you in those circumstances? Add that he put someone in a coma using his fists, made out with a girl two days before asking you to be your girlfriend, angrily broke up with you when you were worried about a friend, AND made out with your arch nemesis. Are anyone's hormones really powerful enough to still desire someone after all that?
I liked the characters, but I think there's more to a relationship than being attracted to someone. Wesley has a lot of growing up to do before he's ready for a stable relationship. Not only is he likely to cheat when he feels slighted by her, but his anger really could be deadly.
Well, this was kind of cute, but it has some major problems. I don't know how this has so many positive reviews.
1. Wesley doesn't have bipolar disorder, he has serious anger issues. I hate that his tantrums were excused by carelessly slapping the term "bipolar" on him. Bipolar disorder is so much more than mood swings.
2. One dose of chemotherapy doesn't immediately mean you lose your hair.
3. Did Kat really have her cast removed after a couple of DAYS? *eyeroll*
4. Imagine being knocked on the head, kidnapped, and then threatened by someone with a gun. Then imagine your ex boyfriend dripping with sweat and blood tackling you (to save you, sure) and laying on top of you... With all his sweat and blood dripping onto you. Would your hormones really overpower the adrenaline? Would you REALLY want him to kiss you in those circumstances? Add that he put someone in a coma using his fists, made out with a girl two days before asking you to be your girlfriend, angrily broke up with you when you were worried about a friend, AND made out with your arch nemesis. Are anyone's hormones really powerful enough to still desire someone after all that?
I liked the characters, but I think there's more to a relationship than being attracted to someone. Wesley has a lot of growing up to do before he's ready for a stable relationship. Not only is he likely to cheat when he feels slighted by her, but his anger really could be deadly.
10/17/2020 c30 Otakuami
I love this story. The characters, the drama, tension and chemistry. The every changing plot, everything kept me on the edge to the absolute end. It was such a satisfying read especially to see. how mental health issues were also focused on like anxiety attacks, bipolar disorder etc. 3
I love this story. The characters, the drama, tension and chemistry. The every changing plot, everything kept me on the edge to the absolute end. It was such a satisfying read especially to see. how mental health issues were also focused on like anxiety attacks, bipolar disorder etc. 3
4/2/2016 c30 Monique
Great story! I loved the chemistry between the two characters. Sure there was a part in the story that was full of action and sometimes a bit overly dramatic for a highschool setting but the characterization and complexity of characters more than made up for it. Love the ending! Loved the entire story! Thanks!
Great story! I loved the chemistry between the two characters. Sure there was a part in the story that was full of action and sometimes a bit overly dramatic for a highschool setting but the characterization and complexity of characters more than made up for it. Love the ending! Loved the entire story! Thanks!
12/5/2015 c30 
2RandomRighter
So adorable. I loved it. I was tempted to review for every chapter just to vent about the feels your characters gave me. Loved the character development, the way the love life wasn't perfect, the way that accepting that they loved each other didn't come till the end. Beautiful.
2RandomRighterSo adorable. I loved it. I was tempted to review for every chapter just to vent about the feels your characters gave me. Loved the character development, the way the love life wasn't perfect, the way that accepting that they loved each other didn't come till the end. Beautiful.
10/22/2015 c30 somersaultkick
This story is very beautiful, it shows that everyone is given a chance to be loved. And yay I love the ending, I love it just the way it is. No bullcrap, just pure love.
This story is very beautiful, it shows that everyone is given a chance to be loved. And yay I love the ending, I love it just the way it is. No bullcrap, just pure love.
6/17/2015 c30 LoveIs4EverCrazy
I am obsessed with this story. Wes and Kat are perfect for each other.
I have a question though, I was reading the sequal to this story and the next day when I went to check if you had updated it, it disappeared? You probly took it down but I really hope you continue with it
I am obsessed with this story. Wes and Kat are perfect for each other.
I have a question though, I was reading the sequal to this story and the next day when I went to check if you had updated it, it disappeared? You probly took it down but I really hope you continue with it
5/21/2015 c10 Meg
"I want you, I need you, oh baby, oh baby..." from 10 Things I Hate About You!
I haven't read very far yet, but I'm loving this story! ;)
"I want you, I need you, oh baby, oh baby..." from 10 Things I Hate About You!
I haven't read very far yet, but I'm loving this story! ;)
5/12/2015 c14 1jedbook
I think everyone hates Jayden now. He toyed with Kat from the beginning. He only truly wanted her when he knew he couldn't have her.
1jedbookI think everyone hates Jayden now. He toyed with Kat from the beginning. He only truly wanted her when he knew he couldn't have her.
5/12/2015 c11 jedbook
I didn't exactly like it when the story jumped to Wes's point of view. It flowed better just from Kat's. Wes was kind of mysterious to me and I liked him like that.
I didn't exactly like it when the story jumped to Wes's point of view. It flowed better just from Kat's. Wes was kind of mysterious to me and I liked him like that.
5/12/2015 c10 jedbook
I loved the ending scene when they were in the snow together. I think she and Wes are perfect for each other.
I loved the ending scene when they were in the snow together. I think she and Wes are perfect for each other.
5/12/2015 c9 jedbook
I'm glad you didn't pop him in this scene because it wouldn't have made sense. It's okay sometimes to not have chapters with certain characters.
I'm glad you didn't pop him in this scene because it wouldn't have made sense. It's okay sometimes to not have chapters with certain characters.
5/12/2015 c8 jedbook
I don't like Amy much but I don't really want to see her get into a fight with Kat. Can't wait to see what happens next!
I don't like Amy much but I don't really want to see her get into a fight with Kat. Can't wait to see what happens next!