for The Middle10/17/2014 c13 evelynlyl01
IM SCREAMING IN EXCITEMENT! out of all the stories i've read this is the best!
IM SCREAMING IN EXCITEMENT! out of all the stories i've read this is the best!
10/16/2014 c2 Mistrelia of the Ice
*Fake French Accent* I am intrigued, hon hon hon. Haha, kidding, so far I like it quite a bit.
*Fake French Accent* I am intrigued, hon hon hon. Haha, kidding, so far I like it quite a bit.
5/4/2014 c31 Guest
... *slow round of applause*
Aaaaa!
Awesome!
Awesome!
Bravo!
Now I need to get some sleep :)
... *slow round of applause*
Aaaaa!
Awesome!
Awesome!
Bravo!
Now I need to get some sleep :)
5/4/2014 c5 Guest
On chapter 5 and Wes has already captured my heart. So far I really like Kat too!
Jayden.. Not so much haha
On chapter 5 and Wes has already captured my heart. So far I really like Kat too!
Jayden.. Not so much haha
5/4/2014 c1 Guest
The first chapter captured my interest. Good sign, thumbs up
My nit picking:
The part where you wrote 'I groaned into the echoness of my locker'.. Echoness seems off, english wasn't my best subject but I'm pretty sure it's not a word so that's why it comes across as an odd part of the sentence
Also where you wrote 'like, literally..', I would get rid of the 'like'
Haha. Yes I am nit picking with these examples but I noticed them. I think I would get rid of the 'literally' too actually and just write that her full head was in the locker
The first chapter captured my interest. Good sign, thumbs up
My nit picking:
The part where you wrote 'I groaned into the echoness of my locker'.. Echoness seems off, english wasn't my best subject but I'm pretty sure it's not a word so that's why it comes across as an odd part of the sentence
Also where you wrote 'like, literally..', I would get rid of the 'like'
Haha. Yes I am nit picking with these examples but I noticed them. I think I would get rid of the 'literally' too actually and just write that her full head was in the locker
4/4/2014 c31 
24DreamWriter10
Can I just start by saying: I loved this story! It was super sweet and cute! Wes seemed so real, and I love how you portrayed someone with a mental disability without making them seem dumb or lesser than other people. If I could give you one thing to work on, it would be Jayden's transition in Kat's mind. Going from nice best friend to total jerk seemed a little sudden and jerky (no pun intended) to me, but other than that it was fantastic! :) Oh, and I would love to read a sequel ;)
24DreamWriter10Can I just start by saying: I loved this story! It was super sweet and cute! Wes seemed so real, and I love how you portrayed someone with a mental disability without making them seem dumb or lesser than other people. If I could give you one thing to work on, it would be Jayden's transition in Kat's mind. Going from nice best friend to total jerk seemed a little sudden and jerky (no pun intended) to me, but other than that it was fantastic! :) Oh, and I would love to read a sequel ;)
3/30/2014 c30 2x.ablaze
Aww, this was great! I loved watching the dynamic of your story evolve and every twist that came with it. Job well done! You're a fabulous writer :D
The epilogue was seriously adorable, I think I squealed a hundred times over!
2x.ablazeAww, this was great! I loved watching the dynamic of your story evolve and every twist that came with it. Job well done! You're a fabulous writer :D
The epilogue was seriously adorable, I think I squealed a hundred times over!
3/21/2014 c31 3TheClosetWriter16
I liked it! :) I was actually thinking about you the other day because you never replied to my review/pm.. Which is weird because you usually did haha.
Anyway I'm looking forward to this! :)
3TheClosetWriter16I liked it! :) I was actually thinking about you the other day because you never replied to my review/pm.. Which is weird because you usually did haha.
Anyway I'm looking forward to this! :)