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4/11/2017 c1 14DemigodessOfEternity
Awww. Lovely
1/2/2013 c1 7LovelySocks
You had me at "Dr. Suess-esque style."
"You moved away, and I learned there are ends." *sobs* Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Moving on, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed it. Cute idea to play around with, and I think you captured it perfectly. Well done.
12/19/2012 c1 Carrie
Awwww... this is so cute, I absolutely adore it! I really, really loved the line "you moved away, and I learned there are ends" because when we're children, or even adults, we tend to believe that things are never going to change (guilty!). This served as a good reminder to me that "nothing gold can stay".
12/18/2012 c1 4Lolitroy
Aww... I love rhyming poems! And your rhymes are good but if you really want a Dr. Seuss-like piece of writing you should watch for rhythm.

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