1/5/2013 c1 173Little girl Big world
WOW. This piece took my breath away. Beautifully written! Amazing word choice. Definitely a favorite.
WOW. This piece took my breath away. Beautifully written! Amazing word choice. Definitely a favorite.
1/4/2013 c1 216ygg
Wow this is beautiful! Very moving poem with marvelous visuals. Her cold, arid soul is so well painted by your words, it becomes almost tangible in reality. The last lines spoke powerfully of our capabilities to transform or be transformed. Extraordinary work I must admit! A favorite :-)
Wow this is beautiful! Very moving poem with marvelous visuals. Her cold, arid soul is so well painted by your words, it becomes almost tangible in reality. The last lines spoke powerfully of our capabilities to transform or be transformed. Extraordinary work I must admit! A favorite :-)
12/21/2012 c1 14Gunney
I like it. It brings a picture into my mind that I would love to create some time. I'll have to think on it.
I like it. It brings a picture into my mind that I would love to create some time. I'll have to think on it.
12/20/2012 c1 81Princess-anna57
This kinda reminds me of myself. I really like this piece. I'm adding it to my favourites list!
Anna :)
This kinda reminds me of myself. I really like this piece. I'm adding it to my favourites list!
Anna :)