for Those Dreams12/20/2012 c1 
5Persevera
I don't like the organization of the poem. There doesn't seem to be a pattern, with stanzas having varying numbers of lines. It's hard to establish a rhythm, which is important in poetry.
[Help me become who I know I can be
Help me to somehow relocate me]- I like these two lines. It's important not to lose yourself in a relationship and those lines speak to that.
5PerseveraI don't like the organization of the poem. There doesn't seem to be a pattern, with stanzas having varying numbers of lines. It's hard to establish a rhythm, which is important in poetry.
[Help me become who I know I can be
Help me to somehow relocate me]- I like these two lines. It's important not to lose yourself in a relationship and those lines speak to that.