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5/6/2013 c1 21Infinitely Silent
I know this is a love poem, but I thought of it as time wasting away. We waste our lives on such meaningless things, only to realize how pointless they are when it's too late. Masterfully done.
4/19/2013 c1 27Perisada
Once again, the metaphor is used so well here. This poem is very technically well done, and while I don't get as much emotion coming through it as I do in some of your other poems, I really like the way you've built it up. This is a strong and insightful piece.
12/22/2012 c1 226Beth Brooks
i love the imagery and flow, the light airy breeze it brings. but still a heavy message.

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