for Kaleidoscope of Memories - The Memories of the Lost8/11/2013 c2 
4Lolitroy
Uwah why didn't you tell me you updated!?
*nibbles on cookie* thanks. Chocolate! My favorite.
Can't wait for Xavier and Charlotte to meet ;)
Anyway, nice chapter. Maybe a bit too much line breaks, but don't mind me. It's really coming out good ;)
The end of the flashback was really awesome hahaha -w-'
And the psycho man... O_O"
Me'll be waiting for an update ;)
4LolitroyUwah why didn't you tell me you updated!?
*nibbles on cookie* thanks. Chocolate! My favorite.
Can't wait for Xavier and Charlotte to meet ;)
Anyway, nice chapter. Maybe a bit too much line breaks, but don't mind me. It's really coming out good ;)
The end of the flashback was really awesome hahaha -w-'
And the psycho man... O_O"
Me'll be waiting for an update ;)
6/1/2013 c10 michelle88222
T_T that was mean... T_T . And yes some much needed XavierXCharlotte fluff, we all need that cheeky little kiss here and there right? :P hehe xD *frobby asian pose*
Anyways...I liked how you had sections of the text in bold and central. It gives quite a nice effect. _ Oh adn Xavier needs to help Charlotte...and FAST!
...SO MEAN... :P
T_T that was mean... T_T . And yes some much needed XavierXCharlotte fluff, we all need that cheeky little kiss here and there right? :P hehe xD *frobby asian pose*
Anyways...I liked how you had sections of the text in bold and central. It gives quite a nice effect. _ Oh adn Xavier needs to help Charlotte...and FAST!
...SO MEAN... :P
5/1/2013 c9 michelle88222
I'm not signed in at the moment but hey you know who I am!
_ Anyhow, yes DUN DUN DUN *enter dramatic music at climax*. I like how you've slowly teased out parts of Charlotte's past. It's going pretty well at the moment. GANBATTE! (Urmmm why am I even saying that...?) Anyways you get the gest! :D
I'm not signed in at the moment but hey you know who I am!
_ Anyhow, yes DUN DUN DUN *enter dramatic music at climax*. I like how you've slowly teased out parts of Charlotte's past. It's going pretty well at the moment. GANBATTE! (Urmmm why am I even saying that...?) Anyways you get the gest! :D
4/6/2013 c8 michelle88222
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! *Runs and hides behind...well you know who and hold's up a racket to protect myself* Hehe. But it's a really good chapter like I said before and THE DRAMATIC FLASHBACK (Insert dramatic music, DUN DUN DUN!). Hehe XD :D :P
Poor Charlotte...poor Sylvia...POOR EVERYONE! :( Meh... Ok sis you better update or else:
1.I will drown you in this (Points to the Inui juice that I made magically appear)
2.I come to your house and hunt you down :P (hehe XD)
Ok I don't sound creepy at all :P but hey! _ (Yes I'm on a sugar high! :P)
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! *Runs and hides behind...well you know who and hold's up a racket to protect myself* Hehe. But it's a really good chapter like I said before and THE DRAMATIC FLASHBACK (Insert dramatic music, DUN DUN DUN!). Hehe XD :D :P
Poor Charlotte...poor Sylvia...POOR EVERYONE! :( Meh... Ok sis you better update or else:
1.I will drown you in this (Points to the Inui juice that I made magically appear)
2.I come to your house and hunt you down :P (hehe XD)
Ok I don't sound creepy at all :P but hey! _ (Yes I'm on a sugar high! :P)
4/2/2013 c1 2myfictionpress14
So far... I love it! I love the song a thousand years. It's a beautiful song. And don't forget to always update! I really want to read more and find out what's going to happen next!
2myfictionpress14So far... I love it! I love the song a thousand years. It's a beautiful song. And don't forget to always update! I really want to read more and find out what's going to happen next!
1/6/2013 c3 Leyla
Also, your english is wonderful so dont worry! Its a good concept, it just needs to be cleaned up a little bit. Good luck
Also, your english is wonderful so dont worry! Its a good concept, it just needs to be cleaned up a little bit. Good luck
1/6/2013 c2 Leyla
The story seems like you're trying too hard to create a complicated character. A character should evolv itself, but you keep adding unnecessary bits ans awkward monolougea that makw the story seems disgenuine. Also what time period is this story taking place? 64 years from now? Or 64 years in the past. Mentin the time period through subtle references to her surroundings and social commentary.
The story seems like you're trying too hard to create a complicated character. A character should evolv itself, but you keep adding unnecessary bits ans awkward monolougea that makw the story seems disgenuine. Also what time period is this story taking place? 64 years from now? Or 64 years in the past. Mentin the time period through subtle references to her surroundings and social commentary.
12/29/2012 c2 michelle88222
Why thank you for mentioning me in your A.N :P .Pretty sure you know who I am so yeah _ And Joker! That is one heck of a name! :P
Why thank you for mentioning me in your A.N :P .Pretty sure you know who I am so yeah _ And Joker! That is one heck of a name! :P
12/24/2012 c1 Michelle P
Started to get interested in it _ and I really like your concept :D . (Oh and not trying to sound creepy to the world or anything, but I think you'll know who I am if I so much as mention the phrase:I hate Kaname? :P)
Started to get interested in it _ and I really like your concept :D . (Oh and not trying to sound creepy to the world or anything, but I think you'll know who I am if I so much as mention the phrase:I hate Kaname? :P)