for Coaxing the Bees6/6/2017 c9 
4villainous
Damn you, McDaniel Men, what a bunch of asses. Also, way to go Sam, always saving the day and whatnot!
4villainousDamn you, McDaniel Men, what a bunch of asses. Also, way to go Sam, always saving the day and whatnot!
6/6/2017 c8 villainous
Dinner with the fam, what could go wrong? Nothing, probably. Hopefully. Jokes, then there'd be no fun, although even without anything going wrong fun could to ensue.. perhaps.
Dinner with the fam, what could go wrong? Nothing, probably. Hopefully. Jokes, then there'd be no fun, although even without anything going wrong fun could to ensue.. perhaps.
6/6/2017 c7 villainous
Man, I was kinda hoping the McDaniel Men would awkwardly walk in.. well I suppose there's a chance that could happen, if I read the next chapter that is.. BUT man oh man, two thumbs up man.
Man, I was kinda hoping the McDaniel Men would awkwardly walk in.. well I suppose there's a chance that could happen, if I read the next chapter that is.. BUT man oh man, two thumbs up man.
6/6/2017 c6 villainous
The answer, continue reading.
Get this drama up in here! I really like this for some reason, I can't put my finger on it, I like the characters, the way you're setting things up and the flow. I also like your style and the fact that with each chapter you manage to keep me interested, y'know how some stories have a few boring chapters where you start to fall off, I have yet to feel that with this! Good job so far!
The answer, continue reading.
Get this drama up in here! I really like this for some reason, I can't put my finger on it, I like the characters, the way you're setting things up and the flow. I also like your style and the fact that with each chapter you manage to keep me interested, y'know how some stories have a few boring chapters where you start to fall off, I have yet to feel that with this! Good job so far!
6/6/2017 c5 villainous
AH I WAS GONNA STOP WITH LAST CHAPTER BUT I HAD TO KNOW WHO SHOWED UP AND NOW THAT I KNOW I HAVE TO KEEP READING BUT OMG I GOT SO MUCH TO DO I SHOULDN'T HAVE HAD THAT NAP EARLIER BECAUSE I WAS SICK LOOK AT ALL THE TIME I HAVE LOST AND TOO MUCH DECISIONS TO MAKE ARE YOU SERIOUS WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO
AH I WAS GONNA STOP WITH LAST CHAPTER BUT I HAD TO KNOW WHO SHOWED UP AND NOW THAT I KNOW I HAVE TO KEEP READING BUT OMG I GOT SO MUCH TO DO I SHOULDN'T HAVE HAD THAT NAP EARLIER BECAUSE I WAS SICK LOOK AT ALL THE TIME I HAVE LOST AND TOO MUCH DECISIONS TO MAKE ARE YOU SERIOUS WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO
6/5/2017 c2 villainous
Damn, I like Sam too!
Totally out there, you always need someone to be the catalyst and I like her style.
Damn, I like Sam too!
Totally out there, you always need someone to be the catalyst and I like her style.
12/5/2016 c43 FeministEmpress
Awww. I love this story! They are so cute. This story was amazing, well-written with rounded, flawed characters and a delightful (and not so delightful) plot twists and turns. This had not only adorable fluff but sincere and meaningful moments throughout the book.
Awww. I love this story! They are so cute. This story was amazing, well-written with rounded, flawed characters and a delightful (and not so delightful) plot twists and turns. This had not only adorable fluff but sincere and meaningful moments throughout the book.
4/8/2016 c22 Bahati
this is so heartbreaking, I hope Riley gets help before she ruins things with Kenz
this is so heartbreaking, I hope Riley gets help before she ruins things with Kenz
12/14/2014 c43 Nejie
Beautiful ending for a story. I like Riley, there's so much growth in her character. For MacKenzie's, I feel you could have done something more. It felt like she's too perfect as a character. I mean she just go on with the flow - she's just too good to be true. I was looking for a major breakdown from her since she was put into a situation where she had to take it all in - Riley's PTSD, the pregnancy, being a mother after highschool, etc. Sure, there where fights but nothing huge where can I feel MacKenzie's true inner emotions. That's just my complaint. Overall, this was amazing.
Beautiful ending for a story. I like Riley, there's so much growth in her character. For MacKenzie's, I feel you could have done something more. It felt like she's too perfect as a character. I mean she just go on with the flow - she's just too good to be true. I was looking for a major breakdown from her since she was put into a situation where she had to take it all in - Riley's PTSD, the pregnancy, being a mother after highschool, etc. Sure, there where fights but nothing huge where can I feel MacKenzie's true inner emotions. That's just my complaint. Overall, this was amazing.
12/7/2014 c1 Nejie
"She's hot. I think I might be gay."
Oh that line and MacKenzie's reaction, dismissing the hot girl. Let's see if Mack would change her mind when she face the hottie. C2 here i come!
"She's hot. I think I might be gay."
Oh that line and MacKenzie's reaction, dismissing the hot girl. Let's see if Mack would change her mind when she face the hottie. C2 here i come!
5/16/2014 c43 Guest
It was it.
im really forwarded for the sequel.
It was it.
im really forwarded for the sequel.
5/16/2014 c31 Guest
I prefer them with out a baby.
its so soon for them..but its ok.
the thing is i really dont like babies.
I prefer them with out a baby.
its so soon for them..but its ok.
the thing is i really dont like babies.