for Coaxing the Bees1/5/2013 c9 pageisdeliberatelyleftblank
It is awesome how quickly you update! This chapter really makes me not like Mackenzie's family, though I guess that it makes sense that they are overprotective, but they were just plain mean. I hope her little outburst makes them pull their heads in.
It is awesome how quickly you update! This chapter really makes me not like Mackenzie's family, though I guess that it makes sense that they are overprotective, but they were just plain mean. I hope her little outburst makes them pull their heads in.
1/5/2013 c8 pageisdeliberatelyleftblank
Filler chapters are ok, but the conversations in this chapter covered a topic I hadn't yet dared to think of, and that was Riley getting deployed again. Now I'm worried that the girls will get separated and that'll be too sad to bare.
Another great, albeit short, chapter. Hope the dinner goes well in the next chapter
Filler chapters are ok, but the conversations in this chapter covered a topic I hadn't yet dared to think of, and that was Riley getting deployed again. Now I'm worried that the girls will get separated and that'll be too sad to bare.
Another great, albeit short, chapter. Hope the dinner goes well in the next chapter
1/4/2013 c7 pageisdeliberatelyleftblank
Yay for kissing scenes! This chapter is really sweet, it's good to see how the girls are reacting to each other. Keep up the awesome writing! Can't wait to read more.
Yay for kissing scenes! This chapter is really sweet, it's good to see how the girls are reacting to each other. Keep up the awesome writing! Can't wait to read more.
1/4/2013 c7 earthserpent
:D oh yah there we go. :) more please.
:D oh yah there we go. :) more please.
1/3/2013 c7 CheeseAwesome
After this... After that kiss... How could you leave a person hanging like this?! I'm having a cuteness sugar attack! Now I can't get a wink of sleep tonight!
There's NOTHING that I can complain about and I usually complain about a lot of things. I'm so into this story! I can't wait for more.
After this... After that kiss... How could you leave a person hanging like this?! I'm having a cuteness sugar attack! Now I can't get a wink of sleep tonight!
There's NOTHING that I can complain about and I usually complain about a lot of things. I'm so into this story! I can't wait for more.
1/2/2013 c6 pageisdeliberatelyleftblank
This is a great story so far. The characters are likable, and it's written really well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and rather glad that I found this story. The title drew me in, it was intriguing.
Keep up the good work. Really looking forward to Reilly rocking up with chicken soup and ice cream.
This is a great story so far. The characters are likable, and it's written really well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and rather glad that I found this story. The title drew me in, it was intriguing.
Keep up the good work. Really looking forward to Reilly rocking up with chicken soup and ice cream.
1/2/2013 c6 earthserpent
:D hmmm i find the chapter short but i love it and i can't wait for the next one. :)
:D hmmm i find the chapter short but i love it and i can't wait for the next one. :)
1/2/2013 c6 Alixermixer
I love the fact that Riley is so into Mackenzie but I definitely have a feeling that Carrie is going to be a problem. I hope that even though they are in the dating phase, that Riley will explain things. Can't wait for more!
I love the fact that Riley is so into Mackenzie but I definitely have a feeling that Carrie is going to be a problem. I hope that even though they are in the dating phase, that Riley will explain things. Can't wait for more!
12/29/2012 c3 Alixermixer
I love this so far. It's almost too sweet and syrupy just the way I love it. Can't wait for more!
I love this so far. It's almost too sweet and syrupy just the way I love it. Can't wait for more!
12/29/2012 c3 earthserpent
:D i think i'm in love with this story. :) please update soon.
:D i think i'm in love with this story. :) please update soon.