for I Promise part 28/18/2006 c1 
1Pheo
Nice, that was a good part two. Although, maybe you should try and make a story with chapters and not just having a different story per chapter. Anyway, great story!~Lots of Love and Pain, Mezo~
1PheoNice, that was a good part two. Although, maybe you should try and make a story with chapters and not just having a different story per chapter. Anyway, great story!~Lots of Love and Pain, Mezo~
7/23/2006 c1 8Alexnandru Van Gordon
Damn...you left me hanging again. It would be interesting to see what John's story is. How on earth did he become one of "them"...
~Still standing ovation~Alexandru Van Gordon
8Alexnandru Van GordonDamn...you left me hanging again. It would be interesting to see what John's story is. How on earth did he become one of "them"...
~Still standing ovation~Alexandru Van Gordon
7/5/2006 c1 11Crimson Ara
So this was a secuel to it I wasn't sure, should of cheacked before I went and reviewed for the first one.
I don't get why these haven't been continued there good and I like them and I'm sure there are other out there who do as well.
So if you do decide to finish this I'll be waiting and eager to read I Promise 3 and all that follow after.
-Crimson Ara
11Crimson AraSo this was a secuel to it I wasn't sure, should of cheacked before I went and reviewed for the first one.
I don't get why these haven't been continued there good and I like them and I'm sure there are other out there who do as well.
So if you do decide to finish this I'll be waiting and eager to read I Promise 3 and all that follow after.
-Crimson Ara
6/30/2006 c1 44Maria Courtiarre
PLEASE write more! I want to know what happens. Do you like the whole vampire thing? I LOVE it. I am, you might say, obsessed. A great book is "Dead as a Doornail". I reccomend it. i look forward to reading the next chapter of your story.
44Maria CourtiarrePLEASE write more! I want to know what happens. Do you like the whole vampire thing? I LOVE it. I am, you might say, obsessed. A great book is "Dead as a Doornail". I reccomend it. i look forward to reading the next chapter of your story.
2/19/2006 c1 autumnevening
interesting story. your wording in a lot of places could be better, more specific. try to remember to mix up words. use a dictionary and a thesorus (I don't know if I spelled that word correctly). Even with those mistakes I'm still interested in what's going to happen next. kudos :-D
interesting story. your wording in a lot of places could be better, more specific. try to remember to mix up words. use a dictionary and a thesorus (I don't know if I spelled that word correctly). Even with those mistakes I'm still interested in what's going to happen next. kudos :-D
11/26/2005 c1 RainRaven
I wonder what Sam is going to say when she stops drinking? I wonder if your going to make a Part 3 because I don't think I saw one. I liked it.
I wonder what Sam is going to say when she stops drinking? I wonder if your going to make a Part 3 because I don't think I saw one. I liked it.
10/11/2005 c1 15LiNdSaY.AP
how cool, i found part two! good stuff, hopefully i'll come across more...
15LiNdSaY.APhow cool, i found part two! good stuff, hopefully i'll come across more...
9/27/2005 c1 Pure Autumn
i like this too but its a bit choppy i think u need to put a bit more description in
i like this too but its a bit choppy i think u need to put a bit more description in
8/7/2005 c1 AubriannaKnight
this story is incredible. you should have it all in one and publish it as a short story.
this story is incredible. you should have it all in one and publish it as a short story.
6/30/2005 c1 27RingWraith14
THIS ONE Story was GREAT!And was as good as the first!Can't wait till next chapter!Anyways...Keep Writing...RingWraith
27RingWraith14THIS ONE Story was GREAT!And was as good as the first!Can't wait till next chapter!Anyways...Keep Writing...RingWraith