for Overdue Fee(ling)s6/20/2014 c1 
13JDFly
I really enjoyed this story. Your humor is . . . 'emotional intelligence of a Dorito' That's classic. The movie reviews were fun. I would have enjoyed more, but you only had one chapter so you couldn't do too many. I'll just have to think up my own one-liner movie reviews. Good story setting too. I've spent a lot of time in that movie rental store trying to select the perfect movie. Hey, I've got one both of your characters could agree on. It's an action adventure romance. "Avatar" Aw, don't laugh.
JD Fly
13JDFlyI really enjoyed this story. Your humor is . . . 'emotional intelligence of a Dorito' That's classic. The movie reviews were fun. I would have enjoyed more, but you only had one chapter so you couldn't do too many. I'll just have to think up my own one-liner movie reviews. Good story setting too. I've spent a lot of time in that movie rental store trying to select the perfect movie. Hey, I've got one both of your characters could agree on. It's an action adventure romance. "Avatar" Aw, don't laugh.
JD Fly
5/31/2013 c1 1DuchessYappingDog
Sigh. So cute. I feel like how she felt about movies with stories on FP. And movies. Sigh. I need a real life Patrick. Mayday mayday!
1DuchessYappingDogSigh. So cute. I feel like how she felt about movies with stories on FP. And movies. Sigh. I need a real life Patrick. Mayday mayday!
4/29/2013 c1 22AFractionOfMySoul
ooh! This is brilliant, I adorec their argument and his plot summary. so cute!
22AFractionOfMySoulooh! This is brilliant, I adorec their argument and his plot summary. so cute!
2/21/2013 c1 32The Siege
"Of course you don't get it. You have the emotional intelligence of a Dorito." AHAHAHAHAHAHA
AWWW THEY'RE SO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :DDDDDDD
THAT WAS A HOT KISS BTW
THEYR'E ADORBS
There are some errors though, for example: ["Well I can't make it rain, so would you settle for kissing me next to the 'When Harry met Sally display."] that should probably end with a "?" right? And I think you used semi-colons incorrectly a couple times but I'm not sure...semi-colons are used to separate independent but related clauses, right? Something like that?
Well anyways, I love this. If only I could find a guy like Patrick...
32The Siege"Of course you don't get it. You have the emotional intelligence of a Dorito." AHAHAHAHAHAHA
AWWW THEY'RE SO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :DDDDDDD
THAT WAS A HOT KISS BTW
THEYR'E ADORBS
There are some errors though, for example: ["Well I can't make it rain, so would you settle for kissing me next to the 'When Harry met Sally display."] that should probably end with a "?" right? And I think you used semi-colons incorrectly a couple times but I'm not sure...semi-colons are used to separate independent but related clauses, right? Something like that?
Well anyways, I love this. If only I could find a guy like Patrick...
2/6/2013 c1 Alltoowell
Waah, that was adorable! I loved how she didn't recognize what he was hinting at. Their banter was really cute too. Great job!
Waah, that was adorable! I loved how she didn't recognize what he was hinting at. Their banter was really cute too. Great job!
12/27/2012 c1 15Petra Arkanian
Hahaha very cute and funny. There were a couple of non-capitalizations and such, but nothing huge. All the quick back-and-forths about movies were really well done. Good read!
15Petra ArkanianHahaha very cute and funny. There were a couple of non-capitalizations and such, but nothing huge. All the quick back-and-forths about movies were really well done. Good read!
12/27/2012 c1 FloraIrmaTylee
Interesting. You do know your movies, whereas I only knew a few. Very cute story, I might add.
Interesting. You do know your movies, whereas I only knew a few. Very cute story, I might add.
12/27/2012 c1 6Carmel March
That was absolute perfection. So cute and so well done. I loved all the movie references! Wonderful job on this :)
6Carmel MarchThat was absolute perfection. So cute and so well done. I loved all the movie references! Wonderful job on this :)