for Whore1/8/2013 c1 
216ygg
Wow this is quite powerful in emotional undertones! Love the imagery of the second line. Great work! Keep writing :-)
216yggWow this is quite powerful in emotional undertones! Love the imagery of the second line. Great work! Keep writing :-)
12/30/2012 c1 237classic violet
Thank you so much for your review! It made my day. I'm glad to see that you're still writing as well. I especially love the line "but I adorned it in ink and steal," This poem is beautiful, short and sweet.
237classic violetThank you so much for your review! It made my day. I'm glad to see that you're still writing as well. I especially love the line "but I adorned it in ink and steal," This poem is beautiful, short and sweet.
12/27/2012 c1 asdfghjkl
I like this verse, you did a great job. Could you consider adding more to it? Take it as the opening and/or closing stanza and build on it in the middle to add detail and structure? It's very good, but I think more could be added to make it have depth. Great stanza though!
I like this verse, you did a great job. Could you consider adding more to it? Take it as the opening and/or closing stanza and build on it in the middle to add detail and structure? It's very good, but I think more could be added to make it have depth. Great stanza though!