
5/23/2013 c1
1Kpopboi
I like it! It's well written, and wordplay is fantastic! Good Job Buddy!
_ -Kpopboi

I like it! It's well written, and wordplay is fantastic! Good Job Buddy!
_ -Kpopboi
5/20/2013 c1
2ninjawolf197
This is great. I am intrigued. At first, I was like what's with the light why is the boy vanishing? It was very beautiful. It was so full of emotion.

This is great. I am intrigued. At first, I was like what's with the light why is the boy vanishing? It was very beautiful. It was so full of emotion.
12/28/2012 c1
16SilverTintedMist
Very lovely and touching piece. I could picture everything clearly in my mind. :)

Very lovely and touching piece. I could picture everything clearly in my mind. :)