for Weeping Willow3/17/2013 c1 
5GuyBoyPerson
I liked it, though I'm not certain I understand it...yet. Good work, good language.
5GuyBoyPersonI liked it, though I'm not certain I understand it...yet. Good work, good language.
3/11/2013 c1 1Arowana Flounder
Beautiful, I love the image of the tree just being a lonely old man. I'm going to think of that everytime I see a lone tree from now on.
1Arowana FlounderBeautiful, I love the image of the tree just being a lonely old man. I'm going to think of that everytime I see a lone tree from now on.
3/6/2013 c1 51Luna's Child
I like how you personified the willow by using several examples; it really brought the tree to life, and I was able to understand its situation. Great poem, I loved it.
51Luna's ChildI like how you personified the willow by using several examples; it really brought the tree to life, and I was able to understand its situation. Great poem, I loved it.
3/2/2013 c1 8M.A.S. Douglas
this is very cool, and very good! i like your take on the weeping willow. this can relate to and be a metaphor for so many things in our lives!
8M.A.S. Douglasthis is very cool, and very good! i like your take on the weeping willow. this can relate to and be a metaphor for so many things in our lives!