for Missed Connections9/13/2013 c12 Cassandra Elizabeth
I seriously loved this chapter. It is high time that tally enjoyed herself. She's always stressing and worrying about god knows what and this chapter was the little relieve that she needed. The thing with Mick may not last and even if it is a fling, it's ok because she deserves some fun.
I seriously loved this chapter. It is high time that tally enjoyed herself. She's always stressing and worrying about god knows what and this chapter was the little relieve that she needed. The thing with Mick may not last and even if it is a fling, it's ok because she deserves some fun.
9/12/2013 c12 Jester79
Wow - that's just wow! I'm not sure how this makes me feel - with most authors alluding to some type of protection now & days - that wasn't really touched on in this chapter. I'm not sure with him being so kind of "over-the-top" if he's wanting to "spread" the wealth that makes up his DNA or something else or if all is good with Tally and not wanting to get preggo or if she's on some kind of BC. I don't think it's a bad chapter, at all - it's good - Tally may just be walking crooked the next day. :)
Wow - that's just wow! I'm not sure how this makes me feel - with most authors alluding to some type of protection now & days - that wasn't really touched on in this chapter. I'm not sure with him being so kind of "over-the-top" if he's wanting to "spread" the wealth that makes up his DNA or something else or if all is good with Tally and not wanting to get preggo or if she's on some kind of BC. I don't think it's a bad chapter, at all - it's good - Tally may just be walking crooked the next day. :)
9/4/2013 c11 Jester79
Just started reading this a couple of days ago. Great by the way. I like Carl - I just wonder if Tally should she decide to try and make a go of a relationship with him would come to resent his inability to be fully intimate with her. Strange mix of characters.
Just started reading this a couple of days ago. Great by the way. I like Carl - I just wonder if Tally should she decide to try and make a go of a relationship with him would come to resent his inability to be fully intimate with her. Strange mix of characters.
9/3/2013 c3 Etanabgf
Hi I began reading your story today and so far I like it. But I have to ask was the Gary Barlow thing intentional or not and can I hope for a Mark Owen character?
Hi I began reading your story today and so far I like it. But I have to ask was the Gary Barlow thing intentional or not and can I hope for a Mark Owen character?
9/3/2013 c11 luv4jake
Oh snap lounging is trying to make a move. I felt so bad for Tally' s friend that was so sad. Poor girl. Until next time. I did enjoy this chapter as always.
Oh snap lounging is trying to make a move. I felt so bad for Tally' s friend that was so sad. Poor girl. Until next time. I did enjoy this chapter as always.
8/25/2013 c10 luv4jake
I'm glad Alex was there that was scary. Young tally had it bad I felt her pain. Ethan and Allie are too sweet for now lol. They'll be hot and heavy before you know it. Until next time. I did enjoy this chapter as always.
I'm glad Alex was there that was scary. Young tally had it bad I felt her pain. Ethan and Allie are too sweet for now lol. They'll be hot and heavy before you know it. Until next time. I did enjoy this chapter as always.
8/25/2013 c9 luv4jake
Oh tally I hope your backstory isn't sad but I have a feeling it is. Since most women have something dark in our history that's not good. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
Oh tally I hope your backstory isn't sad but I have a feeling it is. Since most women have something dark in our history that's not good. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
8/2/2013 c10 Cassandra Elizabeth
This date really upset me. Of course for the obvious reasons but also all the hints at her suicide attempt along with the death of her first child. It was all very sad and my heart goes out to tally.
This date really upset me. Of course for the obvious reasons but also all the hints at her suicide attempt along with the death of her first child. It was all very sad and my heart goes out to tally.
7/12/2013 c9 
7WoodpeckerWho
I'm so in love with this story - it's so refreshing and unique, exactly what I was needing and looking for. I especially like how none of it is predictable, and it's not all about one prince charming. Still, I do love Carl as a character. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially with the new revelation of a man from the past. Please update quickly, I haven't read such a great story in a long time!
7WoodpeckerWhoI'm so in love with this story - it's so refreshing and unique, exactly what I was needing and looking for. I especially like how none of it is predictable, and it's not all about one prince charming. Still, I do love Carl as a character. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially with the new revelation of a man from the past. Please update quickly, I haven't read such a great story in a long time!
7/12/2013 c9 Raven's twimom
Back to real life after a nice weekend. Dealing with the ex is always hard. I would be angry at my friend if she did to me what Vicki did to her. Im enjoying your original story. Thanks for writing.
Back to real life after a nice weekend. Dealing with the ex is always hard. I would be angry at my friend if she did to me what Vicki did to her. Im enjoying your original story. Thanks for writing.
7/11/2013 c9 Cassandra Elizabeth
A secret...well this just got that much more interesting... What could she possibly be hiding in her closet? Another lover? This was a good chapter. Her talk with Ethan went well and I'm glad they had the talk. The rest of the chapter was great. I can't wait to see where you take this next.
A secret...well this just got that much more interesting... What could she possibly be hiding in her closet? Another lover? This was a good chapter. Her talk with Ethan went well and I'm glad they had the talk. The rest of the chapter was great. I can't wait to see where you take this next.
7/3/2013 c8 luv4jake
Man this chapter was funny and sad. I really like Carl but I can see Tally's point. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
Man this chapter was funny and sad. I really like Carl but I can see Tally's point. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
7/2/2013 c8 Cassandra Elizabeth
It's seems like their time together just keeps going on and on...I just want it to end already. It's cute that her son has a little girlfriend. I can't wait for them to hop into the real world again though.
It's seems like their time together just keeps going on and on...I just want it to end already. It's cute that her son has a little girlfriend. I can't wait for them to hop into the real world again though.
6/13/2013 c7 Cassandra Elizabeth
Whenever I read about them together I always feel like he is going to collapse and die...gosh, this is horrible of me but I just don't want her to get married and have her husband die in the following decade or two, leaving her a widow. But then again, true love can withstand anything. Whatever happens I hope she is happy.
Whenever I read about them together I always feel like he is going to collapse and die...gosh, this is horrible of me but I just don't want her to get married and have her husband die in the following decade or two, leaving her a widow. But then again, true love can withstand anything. Whatever happens I hope she is happy.