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11iNdie OT
I would tell this as a bedtime story to my children. Tyla seemed freaked out, but I loved it. Such dark class, my dear. Well done, well done. I especially loved the ending... and the beginning... and the middle.
-Stripes
11iNdie OTI would tell this as a bedtime story to my children. Tyla seemed freaked out, but I loved it. Such dark class, my dear. Well done, well done. I especially loved the ending... and the beginning... and the middle.
-Stripes
4/26/2013 c1 2ninjawolf197
Hey sapphire! May I take your hat sir? If you still don't know who this is it's Hannah. :-) oh, I have a question: how are you able to vomit if your guts are strewn everywhere?
2ninjawolf197Hey sapphire! May I take your hat sir? If you still don't know who this is it's Hannah. :-) oh, I have a question: how are you able to vomit if your guts are strewn everywhere?
1/16/2013 c1 39Taim
Wow. Just wow.
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I like your writing style and how you turn such dark content into what would be an innocent little girl's game. If not for the gore. And the violence.
39TaimWow. Just wow.
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I like your writing style and how you turn such dark content into what would be an innocent little girl's game. If not for the gore. And the violence.
12/31/2012 c1 387tolerate
We should send this to the Fictionpress staff and tell them to add 'Horror' as a category for Poetry. I think I might be scared for the entire day. Good job, you just scared the hell out of me! It's a great poem, and I loved it.
387tolerateWe should send this to the Fictionpress staff and tell them to add 'Horror' as a category for Poetry. I think I might be scared for the entire day. Good job, you just scared the hell out of me! It's a great poem, and I loved it.
12/30/2012 c1 70Naver
This was highly disturbing for I was picturing that being me. It was funny to think about though and I do like the rest of the story with it. The crazy love this lady has is something else. A serial killer after men. Killing them with her love...literally. The violence and bloody scenes make it all the more real. *laughs* *shivers*
70NaverThis was highly disturbing for I was picturing that being me. It was funny to think about though and I do like the rest of the story with it. The crazy love this lady has is something else. A serial killer after men. Killing them with her love...literally. The violence and bloody scenes make it all the more real. *laughs* *shivers*