
1/3/2015 c6 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
Zahra is still learning things about the lion that she didn't know. Actually, I'm shocked that he didn't kill Shefalika as well. So...if that's not true, then what is the truth behind that horrible legend? I really hope you update this, because I'm hella interested.
Zahra is still learning things about the lion that she didn't know. Actually, I'm shocked that he didn't kill Shefalika as well. So...if that's not true, then what is the truth behind that horrible legend? I really hope you update this, because I'm hella interested.
1/3/2015 c5 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
A lot of interesting things turned out from this chapter. Tajara brings fourth the problems but leaves them vague enough to still cause more questions to rise from them. This story is definitely holding my interest and it's probably one of the best animal stories I've read here on Fictionpress.
A lot of interesting things turned out from this chapter. Tajara brings fourth the problems but leaves them vague enough to still cause more questions to rise from them. This story is definitely holding my interest and it's probably one of the best animal stories I've read here on Fictionpress.
1/3/2015 c4 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
This was kind of cute, actually. I can see that Zahra is warming up to Tajara at least a little bit. I can't wait to see how that fight turns out.
This was kind of cute, actually. I can see that Zahra is warming up to Tajara at least a little bit. I can't wait to see how that fight turns out.
1/3/2015 c3 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
Man, Tajara is cold as ice, but I also find him interesting because of that. I really want to know more about why he is the way that he is and why he's grown so cold. I also wonder if that little legend about him is true or not.
Man, Tajara is cold as ice, but I also find him interesting because of that. I really want to know more about why he is the way that he is and why he's grown so cold. I also wonder if that little legend about him is true or not.
1/3/2015 c2 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
So far, I like the way that this started off. Zahra is a great character and really developed, as is her pride. I love where this is going and I'm really interested to see how Zahra and Tajara interact with each other. This ought to be fun.
So far, I like the way that this started off. Zahra is a great character and really developed, as is her pride. I love where this is going and I'm really interested to see how Zahra and Tajara interact with each other. This ought to be fun.
1/3/2015 c1 Tragedy of Light and Dark II
A lion story that isn't the Lion King? Oh, I have this feeling that I'm going to love this. So far, the prologue looks promising. I can't wait to read more.
A lion story that isn't the Lion King? Oh, I have this feeling that I'm going to love this. So far, the prologue looks promising. I can't wait to read more.
4/21/2014 c6 RadicalRadicals777
I hope that Zahra gets over what happened and decides to help Tajara. I want them both to be happy.
I hope that Zahra gets over what happened and decides to help Tajara. I want them both to be happy.
4/21/2014 c6
8Kurogane Black Ninja
Tajara comes out of his skin and reveals a dark past that Zahra wasn't ready to face. Faced with the deaths put on her family's shoulders and the betrayal of Saveresh, she now must choose what is the right path for her. I wonder what will happen from here on out.

Tajara comes out of his skin and reveals a dark past that Zahra wasn't ready to face. Faced with the deaths put on her family's shoulders and the betrayal of Saveresh, she now must choose what is the right path for her. I wonder what will happen from here on out.
4/21/2014 c6 TerminalTragedy
I thought that you abandon this story, and when I came to read my weekly chapter of Defy and Comply, I saw this story and I screamed. I missed reading it so much and I always found it unique among your works because of your use of animal characters opposed to humans. This chapter was well-planned and it was completely unexpected. Love how Zahra is going to have to deal with the bloodstained past of her parents. I look forward to your next chapter!
I thought that you abandon this story, and when I came to read my weekly chapter of Defy and Comply, I saw this story and I screamed. I missed reading it so much and I always found it unique among your works because of your use of animal characters opposed to humans. This chapter was well-planned and it was completely unexpected. Love how Zahra is going to have to deal with the bloodstained past of her parents. I look forward to your next chapter!
4/21/2014 c6 Inu-Inu's Midget Friend
Tajara becomes a more tolerable character now that he's lost some of his mystery. He's realistic and his reasonings for what he does might not be right, but they are his. I have to say that I really have come to like him a lot. Zahra has a lot to take in. I wonder how she's going to react to Tajara when she comes back and what kind of revelations she's going to make.
Tajara becomes a more tolerable character now that he's lost some of his mystery. He's realistic and his reasonings for what he does might not be right, but they are his. I have to say that I really have come to like him a lot. Zahra has a lot to take in. I wonder how she's going to react to Tajara when she comes back and what kind of revelations she's going to make.
4/21/2014 c6 KurlozMakara77
I can't believe Zahra's father did that! Holy crap this is crazy! The best update ever!
I can't believe Zahra's father did that! Holy crap this is crazy! The best update ever!
4/21/2014 c6 roxy
now zahra has a lot to think about. i wonder if she'll still trust tajara or if it will make her regret being with him. i got to know how sad tajara is as a character. man respect for tajara 100 here.
now zahra has a lot to think about. i wonder if she'll still trust tajara or if it will make her regret being with him. i got to know how sad tajara is as a character. man respect for tajara 100 here.
4/21/2014 c6 Ray Chavez
I didn't think that this would ever be updated. I actually thought you had given up on it but it's nice to see that you haven't. I enjoy reading this and I love the render of the lions. It's a story of trust and betrayal, and it's just fantastic.
I didn't think that this would ever be updated. I actually thought you had given up on it but it's nice to see that you haven't. I enjoy reading this and I love the render of the lions. It's a story of trust and betrayal, and it's just fantastic.