for Cole Black Heart7/5/2014 c11 
4JadedPhoenixBurning
I just wanted to let you know that I've been reading on my e-reader which doesn't allow reviews since I rarely get on-line now but I have loved the last two chapters. I eagerly await the next chapter when you are able to update. You are a talented writer whom I enjoy reading works from.
4JadedPhoenixBurningI just wanted to let you know that I've been reading on my e-reader which doesn't allow reviews since I rarely get on-line now but I have loved the last two chapters. I eagerly await the next chapter when you are able to update. You are a talented writer whom I enjoy reading works from.
9/7/2013 c11 luv4jake
Oh know she didn't?! That's one he'll of a favor js. I enjoyed reading and I hope Cole weighs the decision for both him and Madison. Until next time.
Oh know she didn't?! That's one he'll of a favor js. I enjoyed reading and I hope Cole weighs the decision for both him and Madison. Until next time.
8/25/2013 c10 luv4jake
Holy crap I hope Cole doesn't get caught up in her web again and I hope maddie doesn't have her heartbroken as well. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
Holy crap I hope Cole doesn't get caught up in her web again and I hope maddie doesn't have her heartbroken as well. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
8/25/2013 c9 luv4jake
I loved this chapter as always. I love how Cole tries to help each girl. The backstory is good as well. Bringing his family into the mix was pleasant too. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
I loved this chapter as always. I love how Cole tries to help each girl. The backstory is good as well. Bringing his family into the mix was pleasant too. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
7/31/2013 c9 JPB
I was so glad to see the story was updated while I've been away. This chapter was once again a very moving and emotional chapter that was done very respectful to Brandi. I nice balance over all. I'm still with you and looking forward to just what kind of mayhem you have planned for Cole next.
I was so glad to see the story was updated while I've been away. This chapter was once again a very moving and emotional chapter that was done very respectful to Brandi. I nice balance over all. I'm still with you and looking forward to just what kind of mayhem you have planned for Cole next.
7/4/2013 c8 JadedPhoenixBurning
Loved the chapter. So many survivors like to pretend that they are over something that has happened in their past since they feel that if they do then it will somehow make everything okay. Never realizing that the only people that they are fooling are themselves. This chapter was done exceptionally well. Great job.
Loved the chapter. So many survivors like to pretend that they are over something that has happened in their past since they feel that if they do then it will somehow make everything okay. Never realizing that the only people that they are fooling are themselves. This chapter was done exceptionally well. Great job.
6/30/2013 c7 luv4jake
Oh snap Cole lol. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
Oh snap Cole lol. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time.
6/28/2013 c6 luv4jake
I wonder who got Jim fired and is he a secret freak lol. I'm glad his boss is giving him some slack. I can't wait to read more soon. Until next time.
I wonder who got Jim fired and is he a secret freak lol. I'm glad his boss is giving him some slack. I can't wait to read more soon. Until next time.
6/28/2013 c7 J.P.Burning
Really loved the update in my inbox first thing this morning and you are so bad for leaving it there! This is still my favorite story to read and I think I have a friend that could use some of Cole's advice. Congratulations on the chapter.
Really loved the update in my inbox first thing this morning and you are so bad for leaving it there! This is still my favorite story to read and I think I have a friend that could use some of Cole's advice. Congratulations on the chapter.
6/16/2013 c6 4JadedPhoenixBurning
I'm sorry it took so long to review, work blocked fiction press so I had to wait to read & review. Anyway , great chapter. I thoroughly enjoy this story and this chapter did not disappoint. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
4JadedPhoenixBurningI'm sorry it took so long to review, work blocked fiction press so I had to wait to read & review. Anyway , great chapter. I thoroughly enjoy this story and this chapter did not disappoint. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
6/15/2013 c6 6Carmel March
Still loving this, sorry I haven't been reviewing! Keep up the great work!
6Carmel MarchStill loving this, sorry I haven't been reviewing! Keep up the great work!
5/3/2013 c5 luv4jake
Wow that was an interesting chapter. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time. Oh his daughter cracked me up she's too funny.
Wow that was an interesting chapter. I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more soon. Until next time. Oh his daughter cracked me up she's too funny.