for Best Friends Forever11/21/2013 c1 
2astrangertoyouall
I read this story and saw that it doesn't have too many reviews which is odd because this is actually a good story. Kind of heart-breaking and sweet all at the same time. I would suggest that you indicate the times of your little subtitles because it did get a little confusing without a chronology. Overall, it's a good piece of writing. :D
2astrangertoyouallI read this story and saw that it doesn't have too many reviews which is odd because this is actually a good story. Kind of heart-breaking and sweet all at the same time. I would suggest that you indicate the times of your little subtitles because it did get a little confusing without a chronology. Overall, it's a good piece of writing. :D
1/12/2013 c1 2heyitsstupidme
That was really amazing. I loved how you described all those short important moments in their life and it was really like Shawn told the reader the story, with the details he noticed and all the emotions. Reading this made me sad and happy and I think the way you wrote it was amazing. The ending was perfect. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for publishing it.
2heyitsstupidmeThat was really amazing. I loved how you described all those short important moments in their life and it was really like Shawn told the reader the story, with the details he noticed and all the emotions. Reading this made me sad and happy and I think the way you wrote it was amazing. The ending was perfect. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for publishing it.