for What I Didn't Expect6/3/2014 c27 Guest
I adore your stories. The only critique I have for you, it seems you may be in a hurry when typing out your words. I say this because you use the word brought instead of bought and know instead of now-a lot! At least I hope that's the reason.? If you're doing it on purpose, then I guess it's just a quirk of yours?
Anyway, I hope to see more stories from you in the near future!
Daydrmr
I adore your stories. The only critique I have for you, it seems you may be in a hurry when typing out your words. I say this because you use the word brought instead of bought and know instead of now-a lot! At least I hope that's the reason.? If you're doing it on purpose, then I guess it's just a quirk of yours?
Anyway, I hope to see more stories from you in the near future!
Daydrmr
12/17/2013 c21 Nikki
Read a few of your stories now and damn you are really good! Love 'Love me if you dare' and 'It began at Dreyston Bridge' keep up the awesome writing x
Read a few of your stories now and damn you are really good! Love 'Love me if you dare' and 'It began at Dreyston Bridge' keep up the awesome writing x
2/13/2013 c27 juls88-07
This was a great story to follow. Glad to see it have a happy ending! I'd be curious to see you do spin offs on the other band members; would love to hear Hanks story :-).
This was a great story to follow. Glad to see it have a happy ending! I'd be curious to see you do spin offs on the other band members; would love to hear Hanks story :-).
2/13/2013 c27 ctolhouse
What a nice ending to a lovely story. I really enjoyed being along for the ride with Beth, Lee and the others.
What a nice ending to a lovely story. I really enjoyed being along for the ride with Beth, Lee and the others.
2/13/2013 c27 
2auroraglider
As much as I didn't want it to end, I have to say that you did an amazing job wrapping up the story. I was left with a content and happy feeling about how it ended. When will it be published into print and even more, when can we expect the movie? Seriously, Thank You.
2auroragliderAs much as I didn't want it to end, I have to say that you did an amazing job wrapping up the story. I was left with a content and happy feeling about how it ended. When will it be published into print and even more, when can we expect the movie? Seriously, Thank You.
2/12/2013 c26 kyhoney3
I'm really loving this story! It is well written, light and entertaining. I adore the fact that Beth has stepped up to plate with Dylan. Keep it coming!
I'm really loving this story! It is well written, light and entertaining. I adore the fact that Beth has stepped up to plate with Dylan. Keep it coming!
2/11/2013 c25 Jed Linx
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I honestly would have liked if Beth and Lee faught EVER lol. It's so unrealistic to me that they just both feel happy with each other all the time and neither of them is snapping under this pressure and that 24 year old Beth is being so selfless about the whole thing. That Lee is still okay with her being a stripper.. theres just too much acceptance and 100% lovey dovey behaviour for this to even seem a little real to me. And honestly, Lee is too old to be living like he does with the smoking etc. That I will believe though because of the rockstar lifestyle but still.. lol good story though. I'm enjoying it for the most part.
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I honestly would have liked if Beth and Lee faught EVER lol. It's so unrealistic to me that they just both feel happy with each other all the time and neither of them is snapping under this pressure and that 24 year old Beth is being so selfless about the whole thing. That Lee is still okay with her being a stripper.. theres just too much acceptance and 100% lovey dovey behaviour for this to even seem a little real to me. And honestly, Lee is too old to be living like he does with the smoking etc. That I will believe though because of the rockstar lifestyle but still.. lol good story though. I'm enjoying it for the most part.
2/8/2013 c24 auroraglider
Lee and Beth are so cool. I am so happy to see things work out so well for them. Little Dylan is such a sweet child too. Bless his little heart. See, you have me attached to them too. Good writing. You keep it so real.
Lee and Beth are so cool. I am so happy to see things work out so well for them. Little Dylan is such a sweet child too. Bless his little heart. See, you have me attached to them too. Good writing. You keep it so real.
2/6/2013 c22 auroraglider
I really love your writing. It sweeps me away as I truly feel that I am right in the story too. I also adore your characters. They are so real and believable. Good work.
I really love your writing. It sweeps me away as I truly feel that I am right in the story too. I also adore your characters. They are so real and believable. Good work.
2/5/2013 c21 1readingismylife
Just read this straight through and I love it! All of your characters are flipping adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter!
1readingismylifeJust read this straight through and I love it! All of your characters are flipping adorable! I can't wait for the next chapter!