
1/23 c1 amabeck25
I read your story and I really liked it. I truly appreciate both the story and your talent. I want to work on it and put in the effort as a comic commission artist. I would like to convert it into a comic, and I have some ideas that I would like to share with you. I am Dam sure you will love it!
Contact info:
Discord: amabeck
Best regard!
Ama.
I read your story and I really liked it. I truly appreciate both the story and your talent. I want to work on it and put in the effort as a comic commission artist. I would like to convert it into a comic, and I have some ideas that I would like to share with you. I am Dam sure you will love it!
Contact info:
Discord: amabeck
Best regard!
Ama.
4/12/2021 c1 mssarahadams057
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
8/1/2017 c1
1Tatiana Moore
Hey! I haven't been on FictionPress in a while, but you can follow me on facebook or on my website: .com
Thanks for the feedback! :)

Hey! I haven't been on FictionPress in a while, but you can follow me on facebook or on my website: .com
Thanks for the feedback! :)
8/1/2017 c1 Guest
Do you even check this site anymore it's been Yeeeaars
Do you even check this site anymore it's been Yeeeaars
8/1/2017 c1 Guest
But idk how you'll take that :/
But idk how you'll take that :/
8/1/2017 c1 Guest
I have a half a mind to liek spam review I am so mad
I have a half a mind to liek spam review I am so mad
8/1/2017 c1 Guest
It is beyond my comprehension how a story THIS good has gone undiscovered for so long like ! I literally come back to read it again and again every few years and I NEVER reread books because knowing what happens always kinda ruins it for me but this story 3 one of my all time faves. I love how they were childhood friends and always there for each other. Alexander makes me swoon. Emily is vapid. Also even tho I hated how he oogled Emily it gives the story a very realistic edge despite the fact that everything else is just dreamyy~~ i kind of want to know what Alex told his friends about her. Flulff goals. Pleeeease write more things or guide me to more stories like this. I'll write a more detailed review later just wanted to put it out there that this is literally the most underrated story on fictionpress like WHY ARE THERE ONLY NONE REVIEWS ON MY FAVE STORY I AM SO MAD \shakes fist/ fyt me. Chika out xxxx
It is beyond my comprehension how a story THIS good has gone undiscovered for so long like ! I literally come back to read it again and again every few years and I NEVER reread books because knowing what happens always kinda ruins it for me but this story 3 one of my all time faves. I love how they were childhood friends and always there for each other. Alexander makes me swoon. Emily is vapid. Also even tho I hated how he oogled Emily it gives the story a very realistic edge despite the fact that everything else is just dreamyy~~ i kind of want to know what Alex told his friends about her. Flulff goals. Pleeeease write more things or guide me to more stories like this. I'll write a more detailed review later just wanted to put it out there that this is literally the most underrated story on fictionpress like WHY ARE THERE ONLY NONE REVIEWS ON MY FAVE STORY I AM SO MAD \shakes fist/ fyt me. Chika out xxxx
1/27/2017 c1 Toffeema
Such a sweet story - loved it!
Such a sweet story - loved it!
12/28/2014 c1 susumiya08
this was sooooo awesome! I effin cryed when he was ogling emily, it really broke my heart. even if it was a second, it was still very painful. I adore alexander, and I can really relate with maddie, 'cause I have really big teeth and old(22) lol and I havent changed much either... I think it was so touching 'cause I actually know how she felt...except for the handsome kindhearted, sweet, and loving husband of hers... TT_TT make one for me please lol. have an awesome new year and thanks for writing such a beautiful story!
this was sooooo awesome! I effin cryed when he was ogling emily, it really broke my heart. even if it was a second, it was still very painful. I adore alexander, and I can really relate with maddie, 'cause I have really big teeth and old(22) lol and I havent changed much either... I think it was so touching 'cause I actually know how she felt...except for the handsome kindhearted, sweet, and loving husband of hers... TT_TT make one for me please lol. have an awesome new year and thanks for writing such a beautiful story!
8/13/2014 c1
3waifwraithwolf
Incredible. Absolutely incredible; beautiful characters. Is Madeline kind of like Cinderella; was that meant to be an analogy? I don't know but the two stories seemed somewhat similar-in a good way. I hope you write more.

Incredible. Absolutely incredible; beautiful characters. Is Madeline kind of like Cinderella; was that meant to be an analogy? I don't know but the two stories seemed somewhat similar-in a good way. I hope you write more.
6/4/2013 c1
10balloonfista
I've read this before, but it was a long chaptered story? Anyway, loved it! :)
Ri x

I've read this before, but it was a long chaptered story? Anyway, loved it! :)
Ri x
4/18/2013 c1 caffeinequeen
I looooooooove this
I remember reading this like 2 years ago haha thx for reposting
I looooooooove this
I remember reading this like 2 years ago haha thx for reposting
1/9/2013 c1 Guest
Beautiful! I can't even express how much I love reading it. It's jussst UGH! I even cried in the ending! Love it. Love it. Love it!
Beautiful! I can't even express how much I love reading it. It's jussst UGH! I even cried in the ending! Love it. Love it. Love it!