for Why Me?10/21/2018 c34 Acie
I'm screeching. Oh my God, such a rollercoaster, so much love, so much greatness. Plus, the gays prevailed and Dante got together with Ty. It was just such a beautiful story
I'm screeching. Oh my God, such a rollercoaster, so much love, so much greatness. Plus, the gays prevailed and Dante got together with Ty. It was just such a beautiful story
9/2/2015 c5 justme
You remind me of my favorite friend. Your english is very much like hers
Hell i've been laughing my ass off the last hours. More people must serioysly try this, like all fp readers:-)
You remind me of my favorite friend. Your english is very much like hers
Hell i've been laughing my ass off the last hours. More people must serioysly try this, like all fp readers:-)
9/2/2015 c2 justme
Oh my gosh this is freaking hilarious i'm glad i found this story
Oh my gosh this is freaking hilarious i'm glad i found this story
5/15/2015 c34 
4rockspapersnscissors
Aw this was so cute, but what about Luca?
m'tired so I'll keep it short: I loved Ty really she's an adorable character, tho a little dramatic.
Dante was it for me, I loved him and was rooting for him to get the girl as soon as he was introduced. I loved that you threw in a slash bone, beautifully done, but you never addressed Carlos coming out to his father- that's always a big step.
Ifies: Dante's Mom issues were too short and sweet, then the Roberto n Chucky they (together) gave her a bike? Are they a secret couple? bc that would have been a great way for them to relate with Carlos n Fred~! Then there's ty's grampa bit n parent issues... none of that was ever fully addressed, it bugged me but I can live with it.
Then the bad guys: mar-dude, pelican and the adi-skank-chick that all seemed too cut n dry... The mar guy was the mastermind but pelican got all the face time, then the adi-girl you introduced her, made us hate her, then she fades from existence? George too for that matter, you should give the bad guys more motive and means. Take george, he hated ty enough to willingly do what he did, but he was also afraid... you could have played with his fear to make him help dante find ty... like his guilt made him tell dante where they took her.
However my all time ifie was poor luca, you made him seem so unloved and pitiful, where's his happy ever after? T.T
Great story though, I loved it~! XD
Thanks for the great read~!
-RPS
4rockspapersnscissorsAw this was so cute, but what about Luca?
m'tired so I'll keep it short: I loved Ty really she's an adorable character, tho a little dramatic.
Dante was it for me, I loved him and was rooting for him to get the girl as soon as he was introduced. I loved that you threw in a slash bone, beautifully done, but you never addressed Carlos coming out to his father- that's always a big step.
Ifies: Dante's Mom issues were too short and sweet, then the Roberto n Chucky they (together) gave her a bike? Are they a secret couple? bc that would have been a great way for them to relate with Carlos n Fred~! Then there's ty's grampa bit n parent issues... none of that was ever fully addressed, it bugged me but I can live with it.
Then the bad guys: mar-dude, pelican and the adi-skank-chick that all seemed too cut n dry... The mar guy was the mastermind but pelican got all the face time, then the adi-girl you introduced her, made us hate her, then she fades from existence? George too for that matter, you should give the bad guys more motive and means. Take george, he hated ty enough to willingly do what he did, but he was also afraid... you could have played with his fear to make him help dante find ty... like his guilt made him tell dante where they took her.
However my all time ifie was poor luca, you made him seem so unloved and pitiful, where's his happy ever after? T.T
Great story though, I loved it~! XD
Thanks for the great read~!
-RPS
5/15/2015 c1 rockspapersnscissors
Lol, I have a chick forced to marry a don story too XD
O.o tho I never really work on it much T.T
Lol, I have a chick forced to marry a don story too XD
O.o tho I never really work on it much T.T
5/13/2015 c14 MudbloodPride
Okay I was gonna wait until the end of the story to review but goddam you had me cracking up at 2 minute noodles.
My friend. If you're talking about Maggie then let me tell you, youearned a thousand more points for this story xD
God, that was beautiful.
I'm loving this story and shipping Carlos and red SO HARD.
Can't wait to get to the end! Gah. Fingers crossed for more CarRed scenes
Btw, sorry for posting as a guest but my penname is the same under , if you wanna reply or something. I'd love it if you do :')
And now, to contInue the reading.
Okay I was gonna wait until the end of the story to review but goddam you had me cracking up at 2 minute noodles.
My friend. If you're talking about Maggie then let me tell you, youearned a thousand more points for this story xD
God, that was beautiful.
I'm loving this story and shipping Carlos and red SO HARD.
Can't wait to get to the end! Gah. Fingers crossed for more CarRed scenes
Btw, sorry for posting as a guest but my penname is the same under , if you wanna reply or something. I'd love it if you do :')
And now, to contInue the reading.
2/28/2015 c34 10Emoddess
I've been reading Why Me? twice now and I absolutely LOVED every part of it including the plot and well written characters! Everything about this story from the start to the end is just wonderful and entertaining to read. I hope to see more of Ty x Dante, Luca and his current girlfriend and the threesome part definitely piqued my interest! I don't know what's going to happen but you definitely had me wanting more for the bonus chapters! xD
10EmoddessI've been reading Why Me? twice now and I absolutely LOVED every part of it including the plot and well written characters! Everything about this story from the start to the end is just wonderful and entertaining to read. I hope to see more of Ty x Dante, Luca and his current girlfriend and the threesome part definitely piqued my interest! I don't know what's going to happen but you definitely had me wanting more for the bonus chapters! xD
2/13/2015 c6 dnmann
I am loving the way you write Ty. She is amazing and not a weak female. The Mario and Luigi bit was just insane. Keep doing what you are doing and you are fine.
I am loving the way you write Ty. She is amazing and not a weak female. The Mario and Luigi bit was just insane. Keep doing what you are doing and you are fine.
9/26/2014 c15 Guest
milo as in the chocolate stuff?
milo as in the chocolate stuff?
9/18/2014 c34 Samantha
Wow, you have perfect timing. I, literally, just finished reading your story again a few days ago. Liked the chapter and I would love for you to put more bonus chapters up. So, 'till next time, I guess.
Wow, you have perfect timing. I, literally, just finished reading your story again a few days ago. Liked the chapter and I would love for you to put more bonus chapters up. So, 'till next time, I guess.