for Depression Of Your Valley2/24/2013 c1 Alone and Solitude
Beautifully written, coming to understand what you and others lack and how to strive forward so that you become better people and love one another. Wonderful.
Keep it up.
Beautifully written, coming to understand what you and others lack and how to strive forward so that you become better people and love one another. Wonderful.
Keep it up.
1/8/2013 c1 
216ygg
Wow this is quite a ride through different emotional layers! It almost reads like a script for the voice of conscience, but then more poetically worded. Dramatically introspective and infused with thought-provoking strings of emotions, sensations, intuitive impressions and thoughts. Oh and I love "apocryphal starlight".. wonderful imagery! Excellent work again!
216yggWow this is quite a ride through different emotional layers! It almost reads like a script for the voice of conscience, but then more poetically worded. Dramatically introspective and infused with thought-provoking strings of emotions, sensations, intuitive impressions and thoughts. Oh and I love "apocryphal starlight".. wonderful imagery! Excellent work again!
1/7/2013 c1 Punslinger
This is a strangely beautiful, uneven plunge into
emotional depths. The angst seems bitterly overpowering,
until you offer a way up out of the vally through
gentleness and love.
Good work. Keep it up!
This is a strangely beautiful, uneven plunge into
emotional depths. The angst seems bitterly overpowering,
until you offer a way up out of the vally through
gentleness and love.
Good work. Keep it up!