for Guard Dog7/3/2013 c6 
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I love the autumn scenery. Autumn is my favorite season so it adds a nice extra touch. I'm glad that Mamoru finally ended up finding out about Ryuji.
Speaking of Ryuji, he and Kana's fight was humorous. Lol sometimes Mamoru is just as dense as Kana it seems.
I loved this chapter, and I was glad that Mamoru and Seito ended up together as a couple. Great story. I loved it.
13RevampI love the autumn scenery. Autumn is my favorite season so it adds a nice extra touch. I'm glad that Mamoru finally ended up finding out about Ryuji.
Speaking of Ryuji, he and Kana's fight was humorous. Lol sometimes Mamoru is just as dense as Kana it seems.
I loved this chapter, and I was glad that Mamoru and Seito ended up together as a couple. Great story. I loved it.
7/3/2013 c5 Revamp
It's nice to see Seito's thoughts after everything transpired between he and Ryuji. It's a nice sense of character depth. Mamoru and Seito have a cute relationship and I love Mamoru's playful nature. Their love making started out on a more romantic sense with less fire and passion that came from the rough and tumble sessions that he and Kana had in the past. The fact that Seito got frustrated that Mamoru wasn't jealous was comical. Later on, Seito manages to get his rough and tumble session of fiery passion. It was a nice depiction of rough, violent, steamy sex and it was just as enjoyable as your previous lemons. Grand job.
I'm glad that Seito and Mamoru got together and decided to have a committed relationship. They are adorable together.
It's nice to see Seito's thoughts after everything transpired between he and Ryuji. It's a nice sense of character depth. Mamoru and Seito have a cute relationship and I love Mamoru's playful nature. Their love making started out on a more romantic sense with less fire and passion that came from the rough and tumble sessions that he and Kana had in the past. The fact that Seito got frustrated that Mamoru wasn't jealous was comical. Later on, Seito manages to get his rough and tumble session of fiery passion. It was a nice depiction of rough, violent, steamy sex and it was just as enjoyable as your previous lemons. Grand job.
I'm glad that Seito and Mamoru got together and decided to have a committed relationship. They are adorable together.
7/3/2013 c4 Revamp
I like Kaede the most of the three sisters. I also like how they are better fleshed out in this side story. They're actually really interesting characters. It's amusing to read about Ryuji's little quarrels with the girls and just how much of all of the character's sexual pasts are coming out. they sure are a bunch of drama queens. lol.
I love how Seito's kiss comment comes back to Ryuji's mind after the girls leave. The ending to this chapter was endearing and romantic. Very cute.
I like Kaede the most of the three sisters. I also like how they are better fleshed out in this side story. They're actually really interesting characters. It's amusing to read about Ryuji's little quarrels with the girls and just how much of all of the character's sexual pasts are coming out. they sure are a bunch of drama queens. lol.
I love how Seito's kiss comment comes back to Ryuji's mind after the girls leave. The ending to this chapter was endearing and romantic. Very cute.
7/3/2013 c3 Revamp
Seito definitely is intelligent and resourceful. He knows how to get people to do what he wants by sheer power of words alone. He can also read people very well. I actually liked how Ryuji was more of the domineering one of their escapade. It shocked me that he took over like he did as well. It's a nice plot twist.
Oh boy, the notorious sisters are going to come into the scene. Things should get interesting now.
Seito definitely is intelligent and resourceful. He knows how to get people to do what he wants by sheer power of words alone. He can also read people very well. I actually liked how Ryuji was more of the domineering one of their escapade. It shocked me that he took over like he did as well. It's a nice plot twist.
Oh boy, the notorious sisters are going to come into the scene. Things should get interesting now.
7/3/2013 c2 Revamp
Inventive way to start off a chapter with the seemingly clumbsy spill of water that ends up manifesting into a whirlwind of thoughts and curiosity from Ryuji. Seito's comment paired with Ryuji's reaction is priceless comic gold. I busted out laughing imagining such a high pitched scream from him. It was the best part of this chapter.
Seito is so shameless. It's wonderful xD. He just speaks his mind much to Ryuji's horror. This is definitely turning interesting especially with Seito offering himself like that.
Inventive way to start off a chapter with the seemingly clumbsy spill of water that ends up manifesting into a whirlwind of thoughts and curiosity from Ryuji. Seito's comment paired with Ryuji's reaction is priceless comic gold. I busted out laughing imagining such a high pitched scream from him. It was the best part of this chapter.
Seito is so shameless. It's wonderful xD. He just speaks his mind much to Ryuji's horror. This is definitely turning interesting especially with Seito offering himself like that.
7/3/2013 c1 Revamp
Nothing like starting out with a passed out Kana to know this premise will be interesting. Ryuji's escape to the room being unnoticed was comical as well. Ryuji's thoughts on Ophelia's lack of knowledge of his feelings is also amusing. I can see the tinge of horror riddling his expression at the thought. Love how well the two work off of each other's personalities.
Great start.
Nothing like starting out with a passed out Kana to know this premise will be interesting. Ryuji's escape to the room being unnoticed was comical as well. Ryuji's thoughts on Ophelia's lack of knowledge of his feelings is also amusing. I can see the tinge of horror riddling his expression at the thought. Love how well the two work off of each other's personalities.
Great start.
1/30/2013 c6 Toxiclynne
Ok so from what I can gather Earth types are kinda dense. Not especially so but enough that it is noticiable. Or at least the males are. I feel you there Seito you have my heartful sympathy. Kana is so cute and clueless. And I was not expecting a Seito/Ryuji thing going down I was expecting he do something with an unconcious Kana. But maybe it is better this way. I think I really liked Seito's character in this side scene the most. I thought he kinda just like meddling and having good intentions kinda like Ophelia is attempting to do but he had some character development here. Good job. And I would like to see more of the sisters too. They developed a bit as well but not nearly as much as Seito's character. A mini story for Mamoru sisters please?
Ok so from what I can gather Earth types are kinda dense. Not especially so but enough that it is noticiable. Or at least the males are. I feel you there Seito you have my heartful sympathy. Kana is so cute and clueless. And I was not expecting a Seito/Ryuji thing going down I was expecting he do something with an unconcious Kana. But maybe it is better this way. I think I really liked Seito's character in this side scene the most. I thought he kinda just like meddling and having good intentions kinda like Ophelia is attempting to do but he had some character development here. Good job. And I would like to see more of the sisters too. They developed a bit as well but not nearly as much as Seito's character. A mini story for Mamoru sisters please?