for Red & Blue7/7/2015 c2 Guest
Great story, looks like it's going into the memory bank for later days though. Terrible things happen to great stories sometimes.
Great story, looks like it's going into the memory bank for later days though. Terrible things happen to great stories sometimes.
2/10/2014 c2 Drzemka
Hmmm do you think you will write more? Because I just totally want to read it to the end. :D
Hmmm do you think you will write more? Because I just totally want to read it to the end. :D
9/8/2013 c2 Mely-Melx2
All I have to say is that I want more of this story!
I can't wait for you to write more chapters, please don't take to long - its only two chapters in and I'm already attached... I wonder what that says about me?
All I have to say is that I want more of this story!
I can't wait for you to write more chapters, please don't take to long - its only two chapters in and I'm already attached... I wonder what that says about me?
9/6/2013 c1 InsanityAndBeyond
Hehe, I can just tell this is going to be juicy. You have a load of stories going on, wow.
Hehe, I can just tell this is going to be juicy. You have a load of stories going on, wow.
6/22/2013 c1 dizasterdeb
Ooh - don't stop there! Afraid I sniggered at the door that swings both ways. Kinky door - or have I just got a smutty mind? Plan on reading all you have done so far. Me like it! DD
Ooh - don't stop there! Afraid I sniggered at the door that swings both ways. Kinky door - or have I just got a smutty mind? Plan on reading all you have done so far. Me like it! DD
5/15/2013 c1 Sugartits
This has the potential to be great! Blue seems, frankly, hilarious and completely bonkers which is fab ;D please continue soon! :D
This has the potential to be great! Blue seems, frankly, hilarious and completely bonkers which is fab ;D please continue soon! :D
2/9/2013 c1 PuzzledApproach
I think a job at a mental hospitol would probably be the most entertaining abd frightning this ever. Yet, I would love it! I cannot wait for you to update this. I think you are currently my favorite author on fictionpress :)
I think a job at a mental hospitol would probably be the most entertaining abd frightning this ever. Yet, I would love it! I cannot wait for you to update this. I think you are currently my favorite author on fictionpress :)
1/11/2013 c1 
2heyitsstupidme
That was very interesting and quite different from your other stories. I liked it a lot. We don't know very much about the characters yet, but what I always like about your stories is the way you write the character's POV. It's just like visiting them in their head. I would love to find out more about the characters and to see what happens next. Thank you for publishing your stories.
2heyitsstupidmeThat was very interesting and quite different from your other stories. I liked it a lot. We don't know very much about the characters yet, but what I always like about your stories is the way you write the character's POV. It's just like visiting them in their head. I would love to find out more about the characters and to see what happens next. Thank you for publishing your stories.
1/10/2013 c1 2hijacked ambulance
my favorite setting ... mental hospital!
i like rhys's character. he seems almost ... uncaring, but he isnt. but you can tell he really cares about his social life. how he didnt go to see his brother right away because of things like basketball and homework and stuff. so he's interesting for sure.
and blue! he sounds hot. i cant wait until we get to see more of him!
2hijacked ambulancemy favorite setting ... mental hospital!
i like rhys's character. he seems almost ... uncaring, but he isnt. but you can tell he really cares about his social life. how he didnt go to see his brother right away because of things like basketball and homework and stuff. so he's interesting for sure.
and blue! he sounds hot. i cant wait until we get to see more of him!
1/10/2013 c1 4Bathe Me in Black
I like your head, I've decided.
Moar, please! You set up such interesting possibilities in all your stories.
I agree with SenatorBlitz, life would be also fantastic if you updated le Remy.
xoxo ;)
4Bathe Me in BlackI like your head, I've decided.
Moar, please! You set up such interesting possibilities in all your stories.
I agree with SenatorBlitz, life would be also fantastic if you updated le Remy.
xoxo ;)
1/10/2013 c1 6SenatorBlitz
i'm digging your words and your plot. keep them coming and i will keep on reading. also, if you could be so kind as to update 'jinxing remy' small angels will sing you to sleep.
6SenatorBlitzi'm digging your words and your plot. keep them coming and i will keep on reading. also, if you could be so kind as to update 'jinxing remy' small angels will sing you to sleep.