for Witness In Memory11/19/2013 c21 MsTaylor
I really enjoyed this chapter,can't wait until they get close to bad dude lol
I really enjoyed this chapter,can't wait until they get close to bad dude lol
9/30/2013 c16 
1violet-eyez
that was so mean, why didn't jared say anything to her before this, esp when he knew she was struggling thru this all alone? is going to end up with declan or jared? i kinda want her to end up with declan
1violet-eyezthat was so mean, why didn't jared say anything to her before this, esp when he knew she was struggling thru this all alone? is going to end up with declan or jared? i kinda want her to end up with declan
4/15/2013 c4 2AmberTimber
Another great chapter. Arizona's disability of having no sensation of feeling I'd guess doesn't distract her mind so instead she has developed psychic abilities in its place. Really saddened by Sydney's death, I was hoping they'd find the girls in time but in reality this is seldom the case. The tension both positive and negative between Ari and Dec is really growing. Its just a matter of time, LOL! Great job once again!
2AmberTimberAnother great chapter. Arizona's disability of having no sensation of feeling I'd guess doesn't distract her mind so instead she has developed psychic abilities in its place. Really saddened by Sydney's death, I was hoping they'd find the girls in time but in reality this is seldom the case. The tension both positive and negative between Ari and Dec is really growing. Its just a matter of time, LOL! Great job once again!
4/3/2013 c3 AmberTimber
Fisrt of all, I luv your main character's name. Arizona Cross is just awesome! Ari and Declan are very well defined, both with troubled pasts that I think you've just scratched the surface of their problems. Her disabilty countered with her super ability really sets her up for internal as well as external conflict and the plot of the missing girls only adds to the suspense and I know upcoming confrontations. Great job. Really enjoyed the first three chapters.
Fisrt of all, I luv your main character's name. Arizona Cross is just awesome! Ari and Declan are very well defined, both with troubled pasts that I think you've just scratched the surface of their problems. Her disabilty countered with her super ability really sets her up for internal as well as external conflict and the plot of the missing girls only adds to the suspense and I know upcoming confrontations. Great job. Really enjoyed the first three chapters.