for Hammered4/3/2023 c1 Guest
Did the author delete the additional chapters? I could have sworn this story had more chapters..I remember a whole plot line. Did this author move their stories to another website? Does anyone have the link?
Did the author delete the additional chapters? I could have sworn this story had more chapters..I remember a whole plot line. Did this author move their stories to another website? Does anyone have the link?
12/7/2016 c16 
1quayjahn
Oh noooo. I was looking forward to know, how it continues between the two of them. They grew so much and well, the next day would complete the cycle in a way.
I hope you'll continue one day!
1quayjahnOh noooo. I was looking forward to know, how it continues between the two of them. They grew so much and well, the next day would complete the cycle in a way.
I hope you'll continue one day!
8/20/2016 c10 Squee
I love this already. I mean, I like how you're dealing with the 'putting people on a pedestal' thing. I also like how Jason grew up to be more mature because of his earlier experiences with women. 3
It's also super adorable how Jason acts so flustered around sebastien. What a qt
I love this already. I mean, I like how you're dealing with the 'putting people on a pedestal' thing. I also like how Jason grew up to be more mature because of his earlier experiences with women. 3
It's also super adorable how Jason acts so flustered around sebastien. What a qt
6/16/2014 c12 A.Collins
"I did, yeah. Called Jay came over and he talked to me, convinced me to find you today. At some point, he poured me into bed with a bottle of water and some painkillers on the end table. I guess he slept on the couch while I slept it off because he was still there this morning. He shoved me out the door to the car you sent so I could come to talk to you."
That was one long-ass winded answer to a simple question.
"I did, yeah. Called Jay came over and he talked to me, convinced me to find you today. At some point, he poured me into bed with a bottle of water and some painkillers on the end table. I guess he slept on the couch while I slept it off because he was still there this morning. He shoved me out the door to the car you sent so I could come to talk to you."
That was one long-ass winded answer to a simple question.
6/16/2014 c11 A.Collins
Sorry, pressed send by accident.
3) way too much backstory. That scene where Jason told us about Ari... that literally does not happen in real life like that, unless you're talking to a shrink or someone specifically asked to hear that story. You could have shrunk it down by half.
4) CMON SEB OPEN UP TO YOUR MAANNN
That last one was just for me to seb, who I love.
Sorry, pressed send by accident.
3) way too much backstory. That scene where Jason told us about Ari... that literally does not happen in real life like that, unless you're talking to a shrink or someone specifically asked to hear that story. You could have shrunk it down by half.
4) CMON SEB OPEN UP TO YOUR MAANNN
That last one was just for me to seb, who I love.
6/16/2014 c11 A.Collins
First, let me just say that I absolutely love this story.
1) sometimes you get redundant. A paragraph will basically be reworded, or the words just rearranged in a different order, but the message is still the exact same. You did this in this chapter - it was during a scene in the cafeteria or something. Plus, Jason said "I answer every question you ask" twice in less than 5 sentences.
2) something about this story seems too Marty Stu.
First, let me just say that I absolutely love this story.
1) sometimes you get redundant. A paragraph will basically be reworded, or the words just rearranged in a different order, but the message is still the exact same. You did this in this chapter - it was during a scene in the cafeteria or something. Plus, Jason said "I answer every question you ask" twice in less than 5 sentences.
2) something about this story seems too Marty Stu.
2/24/2014 c16 16atenea-in-the-sky
Ohh please, won't you keep updating? I just love those guys and want to see how it'll all end. I love how they interact. And Alex and Jay are just awesome.
16atenea-in-the-skyOhh please, won't you keep updating? I just love those guys and want to see how it'll all end. I love how they interact. And Alex and Jay are just awesome.
10/11/2013 c4 18Maddam Redder
Awe, this chapter was so sweet! :) This is a great story so far! I'm glad I found it! ;)
18Maddam RedderAwe, this chapter was so sweet! :) This is a great story so far! I'm glad I found it! ;)
8/27/2013 c16 unico
Just read the whole story in one go. I really like it so far although I did notice a few mistakes... Anyway just wanted to thank you for pointing out the song at the beginning of this chapter. You were absolutely right about it, both video and lyrics were really intense - thank you for giving this hint!
Just read the whole story in one go. I really like it so far although I did notice a few mistakes... Anyway just wanted to thank you for pointing out the song at the beginning of this chapter. You were absolutely right about it, both video and lyrics were really intense - thank you for giving this hint!
7/30/2013 c16 Starrygirl
I like the story behind it, but I'm a person who reads smut once or twice in a story and generally get bored of pretty easy! Please don't let every single chapter have smut - it hasn't so far I dont think! Also I think your characterisation is good and that why I look forward to updates! So people who say it sucks and are stickin around must enjoy the smut! So least your making people enjoy the story in different aspects! Anyways well done, good story! I also hope they have kids and like do it the way Neil Patrick Harris did cos how cute is his family ?:O but yea I can see sebastian wanting to adopt! Also I hope Sebastian knows the rest of the plan too! I look forward to future updates
I like the story behind it, but I'm a person who reads smut once or twice in a story and generally get bored of pretty easy! Please don't let every single chapter have smut - it hasn't so far I dont think! Also I think your characterisation is good and that why I look forward to updates! So people who say it sucks and are stickin around must enjoy the smut! So least your making people enjoy the story in different aspects! Anyways well done, good story! I also hope they have kids and like do it the way Neil Patrick Harris did cos how cute is his family ?:O but yea I can see sebastian wanting to adopt! Also I hope Sebastian knows the rest of the plan too! I look forward to future updates
7/30/2013 c14 Starrygirl
Kinda disappointed thAt he didn't manage to get all the plan out!
Kinda disappointed thAt he didn't manage to get all the plan out!
7/19/2013 c9 9Pantu
I'm really enjoying this so far. It's really nice to read slash where both parties are (mostly) happy with what they're feeling. (Which is kind of ironic because that's exactly what I seem to write all the time).
I like your characters, although I have to admit I do find Jason's now complete acceptance of his gay tendencies kind of amusing. I can certainly understand why Sebastien my be a bit surprised. You're writing is sexy and yet kind of warm and fuzy at the same time. I'm trying to pace myself so I don't get to the end in one go. But I'm struggling to resist the "next" button.
Also I laughed so much at the towel/parots/mop scene. I was reading on my phone so I couldn't review at the time. But seriously, it was hilarious. So thanks.
-Pantu
9PantuI'm really enjoying this so far. It's really nice to read slash where both parties are (mostly) happy with what they're feeling. (Which is kind of ironic because that's exactly what I seem to write all the time).
I like your characters, although I have to admit I do find Jason's now complete acceptance of his gay tendencies kind of amusing. I can certainly understand why Sebastien my be a bit surprised. You're writing is sexy and yet kind of warm and fuzy at the same time. I'm trying to pace myself so I don't get to the end in one go. But I'm struggling to resist the "next" button.
Also I laughed so much at the towel/parots/mop scene. I was reading on my phone so I couldn't review at the time. But seriously, it was hilarious. So thanks.
-Pantu
7/18/2013 c16 BlueMoonlily
yaaay for the upcoming smut! :D lol
just two questions:
one: does sebastien know about jason's hospital time yet?
and two: how old are these two? i dont think you've ever really said and it would help me visualize the two :)
thanks! i really do like this story even if it is in major need of an edit lol i can see you working through the characters as you write it and that isn't neccesarily a bad thing :) also, i love amy and her crazy pets xD
yaaay for the upcoming smut! :D lol
just two questions:
one: does sebastien know about jason's hospital time yet?
and two: how old are these two? i dont think you've ever really said and it would help me visualize the two :)
thanks! i really do like this story even if it is in major need of an edit lol i can see you working through the characters as you write it and that isn't neccesarily a bad thing :) also, i love amy and her crazy pets xD
7/16/2013 c16 willow1122
ThankyouThankyouThankyou!
I love these two, more than I usually feel for the protagonists of my favorite smut.
ThankyouThankyouThankyou!
I love these two, more than I usually feel for the protagonists of my favorite smut.