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1/24/2013 c3 2Enlightened Tenshi
I knew it! Sorry, I could tell what was going on. XD Chemistry is so interesting. But I do feel sorry for Arizona though. :(I hope she gets back at that bastard... whatever he did...

You're on a roll, hun (yes, I'm country XD). Keep up the awesome job. :3
1/24/2013 c2 Enlightened Tenshi
Things are definitely heating up here! XD I liked how you portrayed her thoughts as her "inner goddess." Haven't heard that before.. I like it. :3 And is it just me, or was that headache too sporadic to have been natural? *wink wink*

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next installment. :D
1/24/2013 c1 Enlightened Tenshi
Interesting start to the story. There's a good beginning here, it gives a little information, bot not so much that we won't want to read the next chapter. Very nicely done. :D

I like the way you naturally incorporated something unnatural... wait, hold on. XD I mean, you make it sound like vampire bars are the norm, or kind of. It just flows with your plot, and it works, so good job.

Wonderful beginning, and can't wait to read the next chapter. :3
1/16/2013 c2 HopelesslyWaitin
Ohhh things are starting to pick up...can't wait to see what happens to Terry.
1/16/2013 c2 Moon Sage
Ooh, very interested. :D that ex "best-friend" and ex...ugh, that's horrible. xP
1/13/2013 c1 5HopelessGenius
I must say that I like what you've got going on here. It's well written with only a few errors throughout. I'm looking forward to reading more.
1/13/2013 c1 HopelesslyWaitin
Liking where it's going. I've been looking for a good vamp fic and i can't wait for the rest of this. Update soon!

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