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55Al Aaraaf
Wow. The hurt is this seems almost overwhelming. I feel this overwhelming bitterness in it as well. Truly sorry for the emotion that caused them words to be written, but not the words themselves. You did truly weave a vivid picture that I could follow from start to finish. Odd how the worse we feel, the better we write. At least, in my case, I have found this to true. I look forward to more of your works in the future.
55Al AaraafWow. The hurt is this seems almost overwhelming. I feel this overwhelming bitterness in it as well. Truly sorry for the emotion that caused them words to be written, but not the words themselves. You did truly weave a vivid picture that I could follow from start to finish. Odd how the worse we feel, the better we write. At least, in my case, I have found this to true. I look forward to more of your works in the future.