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1/17/2013 c2 336TheGlycoprotein
Loved the first one, I thought it was epic, the imagery and the literal sense and meaning going hand in hand - epic!

The second was much more cryptic, however I like how the colour "pink" - as written in the first line - seems to give each line of the haiku a common root, i.e the pink of flower petals and the pink colour of a mouth irritated by ulcers.

Love haikus, as you know well! Keep writing :D
1/17/2013 c2 True Talker
Do You know that pink is the colour that means love? When You type about ulcers You make me concerned that You are worrying about things.
1/17/2013 c1 True Talker
This just makes me think.
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