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1/19/2013 c2 56SomeFuckingGirl
Well written, except a few spelling mistakes. It gets the fear and pain across well! Keep it up!
1/18/2013 c1 SomeFuckingGirl
I like this. A lot. Please continue. Just a few things to point out:

". . .Tiny sequestered area of like 10 feet." Take out "like", and write "10" as ten.

There are a lot of 'its' that should be "it's" When you are trying to say "it is" write "it's" and when you are trying to say "it belongs to. . ." write "its"

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