2/24/2013 c1 Alone and Solitude
I really liked this, its different and made me feel like there is someone or something out there looking after us and loving us no matter what may happen.

Keep it up.

1/20/2013 c1 Punslinger
What a beautifully written, spine-chilling salute to
the spirituality of attempted suicide! Only someone
who has been driven to the edge could appreciate the
fascinating smile of slashed wrists. Congratulations
on surviving such a harrowing journey, even if it was
made only in creative imagination.

1/20/2013 c1 216ygg
Very spiritually uplifting, giving hope for times when hope seems buried too deeply to truly believe in. Love the title too! It fits wonderfully well with the message of the poem. Great write!

1/20/2013 c1 13LadyToni
I like the story you tell here. This is a neat form of poetry I think there is more creativity shown in these forms because there is a set amount of syllables and the goal is to be as effective as possible with your word choice. Rock on grrl!