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2/11/2013 c2 6theStarfly
I'm probably going to comment on the blog as well, but I must say here that I am truly enjoying this new version.

Even though it seems a bit odd to be reading something that in my mind has somewhat already happened?

I like the character of Kore alot, and I look forward to seeing what the General and Calentine are going to do to get out of this mess!
2/9/2013 c2 chocolatebazzar
Now I am just going to take a wild stab in the dark and assume that Cale is the human heir. I mean, this is a completely wild guess, absolutely nooo evidence what-so-ever.
2/6/2013 c2 Guest
Will Cale have a talent in this version other than people not killing him and winning over the odd one here and there!
2/5/2013 c1 Sincerely
Easier to read doesn't necessarily mean better. But i guess i understand why you had to dumb it down for so many readers who can barely read a straight sentence.
2/3/2013 c2 serrival
ALIM! PARAZ! Yes, I am in love with this chapter
Kore seems like a great character so far, with a solid head on her shoulders. I'm anxious to see how she'll affect the story (if you do have plans for her, that is).

I quite like the new version so far; it's definitely clearer in terms of explaining the relationship between Grei and Asotegi. And, of course, it helps that Ja Alim was explaining it with his sharp tongue

The pillow biting lines- ahh, hilarious. Great job with this chapter!
2/2/2013 c1 misssilivren
definitely liking this version more, especially as we're introduced to pirates much more quickly. kore is an interesting one, and right now i'm thinking that she's going to provide calentine's way in for the pirates?

as usual, the dynamic between the dzalin-as-a-racist-whole and the dzalin-as-individually-quite-nice-actually is fun and frustrating.
1/30/2013 c1 Ranilyn
It is clear that I won't be catching up on my reviews any time soon, but if you're rewriting this, I'm going to try my best to leave a review behind for each chapter from now on. It's the least I could do!

I am liking the new chapter! Gives the beginning more depth, and I like the extra scenes, particularly the one where Calentine does a bit of reflection and has a talk with his aunt. :) Kore makes for a fun new character...I'm also going take a chance on this gut feeling I have and say she's from the Pirates Islands. Ohhh, that'll make this a lot more interesting!

I thought your old Corsair's Crown was turning out rather nicely, but if you're planning to make it even better, well, I am EXTREMELY excited to see where you're going to take this story! So stress and take your time! You spend a lot of time so you can write us some spectacularly good stuff,actually update quite frequently AND do so in wonderfully enormous chunks. So, I'm not gonna hold it against you when you want some extra time to polish or yank the story around a bit. XD I certainly wouldn't be able to do this!
1/26/2013 c1 chibikodo
Yeesh what horrid luck. This rewritten version is less rushed than the first one, and I like getting to see Cale's village.. And this mysterious girl and the mentions if the pirate king are great.
1/25/2013 c1 Melee
Hmmmmmm... Well, its different, Cale is kinda cocky he's bragging! Feels out of Character for him weird?
1/25/2013 c1 1Eidolysm
Oh wow, I like this version. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what other changes and improvements you're making!
1/24/2013 c1 SpazticCat
This first chapter is certainly easier to read than the original. I do hope that you keep some of the things from the original... I love he's so worried about Asotegi, and I love the interaction between him and Asotegi's son and the princess!

(Also my phone thinks the closest thing to "Asotegi" is "stegosaurus.")
1/23/2013 c1 Sapphire2619
Can't wait for more...can't believe ur putting us through this again lol
1/23/2013 c1 Guest
i liked the original chapter.
1/23/2013 c1 serrival
Wow, so it's being rewritten- and just as I was about to reread the story, too! Well, I won't complain over more Calentine. Good luck with rewriting!
1/23/2013 c1 1HideAndGoSeek
I think I like this version better haha. It just seems so much clearer and I can't wait to see what else you've done to the story!
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