for The Keeper's Captive6/17/2015 c13 
3morningstorm70
Thank you for the new chapter i was very happy
Hope u update soon can't wait
3morningstorm70Thank you for the new chapter i was very happy
Hope u update soon can't wait
6/17/2015 c13 1Nea.M
Your Back!
Welcome Back!
Where have you been?
But, I'm glad you've updated!
Thanks for the update and do please update soon-er?
pleeeeeeeeease!
1Nea.MYour Back!
Welcome Back!
Where have you been?
But, I'm glad you've updated!
Thanks for the update and do please update soon-er?
pleeeeeeeeease!
5/25/2015 c12 Karunjaal
This tale was just as riveting as I expected...even more than so, actually! But what a shame, it's unfinished D: are you going to continue it? Please do, I can't wait to read what happens next!
But other than that, good luck and keep up the good work :D
This tale was just as riveting as I expected...even more than so, actually! But what a shame, it's unfinished D: are you going to continue it? Please do, I can't wait to read what happens next!
But other than that, good luck and keep up the good work :D
5/25/2015 c1 Karunjaal
Holy shit I love this story already. Great beginning, can't wait to read the rest! :D
Holy shit I love this story already. Great beginning, can't wait to read the rest! :D
3/26/2015 c12 petrisha.naidoo
I loved it , a very interesting story thou it isn't finished and you left us at a cliffhanger ..is keith gonna go back and leave alair , or is he gonna stay in eastland and make alair the happiest man in the world? Can't wait for the next chapter ..please update soon .
I loved it , a very interesting story thou it isn't finished and you left us at a cliffhanger ..is keith gonna go back and leave alair , or is he gonna stay in eastland and make alair the happiest man in the world? Can't wait for the next chapter ..please update soon .
1/26/2015 c12 Marie Starr
No! What's going to happen! I feel something big is going to happen next! Looking forward to the update!
No! What's going to happen! I feel something big is going to happen next! Looking forward to the update!
12/9/2014 c12 1SilverSamurai26
GAH! NO!
(First off: Sorry I haven't reviewed this wonderful, beautiful, fantastic story yet- I've been REALLY busy with life. And depressed- But who cares about that? XD Back to review-)
NO! SO CLOSE! T_T They were SO CLOSE to finally- UGH! But from the sounds of it, this story isn't quite done yet. So yay- I have more to look forward to. :D Right?
Can't wait for the next chapter! (I just love these stories SO much! TvT)
1SilverSamurai26GAH! NO!
(First off: Sorry I haven't reviewed this wonderful, beautiful, fantastic story yet- I've been REALLY busy with life. And depressed- But who cares about that? XD Back to review-)
NO! SO CLOSE! T_T They were SO CLOSE to finally- UGH! But from the sounds of it, this story isn't quite done yet. So yay- I have more to look forward to. :D Right?
Can't wait for the next chapter! (I just love these stories SO much! TvT)
11/19/2014 c12 1Nea.M
RAWR! a twist a twist! yeah!
i thought, the story would end when the thingy was fixed but thank you for making it not the case!
I'll be looking forward for your update!
1Nea.MRAWR! a twist a twist! yeah!
i thought, the story would end when the thingy was fixed but thank you for making it not the case!
I'll be looking forward for your update!
11/18/2014 c12 3signstoabrokenheart
This was awsome!
You work that sexual tension...
Btw, I side with Keith on this one _
This was awsome!
You work that sexual tension...
Btw, I side with Keith on this one _
10/28/2014 c11 3signstoabrokenheart
Oh my gosh!
I am sitting on the edge of my seat! This story is even more exciting and mysterious than the first. I especially love how clever you are in making up the prophesy.
Can't wait till the next chapter!
Oh my gosh!
I am sitting on the edge of my seat! This story is even more exciting and mysterious than the first. I especially love how clever you are in making up the prophesy.
Can't wait till the next chapter!
10/25/2014 c11 Nea.M
first of all.. welcome back..
and second.. you are a TEASE! sadist!
third, very well written save for a few little mistype words..
but all and all, great job..
i'll be waiting for the update in edge of my seat anticipation so please don't take too long..
first of all.. welcome back..
and second.. you are a TEASE! sadist!
third, very well written save for a few little mistype words..
but all and all, great job..
i'll be waiting for the update in edge of my seat anticipation so please don't take too long..
10/25/2014 c11 len
Ugh! Fck you! Cutting it right there! You are a very bad tease! In all sense of the word!
Arrgh! You better update sooner this time dang it!
But other than that I'm shaking in excitement at the end right there.. just awesome!
Ugh! Fck you! Cutting it right there! You are a very bad tease! In all sense of the word!
Arrgh! You better update sooner this time dang it!
But other than that I'm shaking in excitement at the end right there.. just awesome!
10/24/2014 c11 1SilverSamurai26
;x;
Yay! New chapter! This is wonderful! Keith and Alair better both live. (I know they will, but I still want to say it so you don't get any ideas. CB) Can't wait for the next chapter!
1SilverSamurai26;x;
Yay! New chapter! This is wonderful! Keith and Alair better both live. (I know they will, but I still want to say it so you don't get any ideas. CB) Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/24/2014 c11 Malachi2223
This is really good and exciting, but it's been so long since you last posted a chapter that this feels like it is too short.
This is really good and exciting, but it's been so long since you last posted a chapter that this feels like it is too short.