for The Keeper's Captive9/6/2013 c10 guesst
Always delighted to see an update, wonderful as always, terrible once it is finished cos I have to wait for the next...but loads of thanks, till the next then...
Always delighted to see an update, wonderful as always, terrible once it is finished cos I have to wait for the next...but loads of thanks, till the next then...
8/14/2013 c10 malachi2223
Great story so far. Can't wait for the rest!
Great story so far. Can't wait for the rest!
8/11/2013 c10 
1Nea.M
again,
you, my dear author is a tease.
a horrible tease both on the story's sexual and plot development and i can't help but love and hate you...
anyways, please update sooner...
wish you all the best.
1Nea.Magain,
you, my dear author is a tease.
a horrible tease both on the story's sexual and plot development and i can't help but love and hate you...
anyways, please update sooner...
wish you all the best.
8/9/2013 c10 1Kid Darkness
Fantastic update, if I do say so myself. I love all your stories, and your creativity and imagination behind them. I find them fascinating and refreshing, much unlike the usual (boring) highschool stories or vampires out to get blood but found love instead cliche. So these stories of yours are really awesome to me! I'm not much of a writer in Fictionpress, I have Fanfiction work to be responsible of; so reading your stories makes me relax and pump up my author-juices (if that's even a word haha) I love Alair and Keith's strained relationship and how they actually care for each other (deep, deep, DEEP down inside). This new chapter left me wondering about Keth's blurry past, hmmm.. I really do hope Alair ends up with him, he's acting like an ass right now, but I can't blame him for his confusion and frustrations haha Again, great update! I'm sorry if I talk too much :P
1Kid DarknessFantastic update, if I do say so myself. I love all your stories, and your creativity and imagination behind them. I find them fascinating and refreshing, much unlike the usual (boring) highschool stories or vampires out to get blood but found love instead cliche. So these stories of yours are really awesome to me! I'm not much of a writer in Fictionpress, I have Fanfiction work to be responsible of; so reading your stories makes me relax and pump up my author-juices (if that's even a word haha) I love Alair and Keith's strained relationship and how they actually care for each other (deep, deep, DEEP down inside). This new chapter left me wondering about Keth's blurry past, hmmm.. I really do hope Alair ends up with him, he's acting like an ass right now, but I can't blame him for his confusion and frustrations haha Again, great update! I'm sorry if I talk too much :P
8/9/2013 c10 3morningstorm70
Oh smexy can't wait for the next update, I hope they both come out of this and have some mad passionate love making
3morningstorm70Oh smexy can't wait for the next update, I hope they both come out of this and have some mad passionate love making
6/29/2013 c9 Guest
LOOOOOOVE it .I so love you're work.
LOOOOOOVE it .I so love you're work.
6/29/2013 c9 chibikodo
Sorry Alair, seems like Keith doesn't even really know because he can't remember his childhood. Guess we'll have to wait to find out.
Sorry Alair, seems like Keith doesn't even really know because he can't remember his childhood. Guess we'll have to wait to find out.
6/3/2013 c7 1Nea.M
WONDERFUL! WONDERFUL!
It is absolutely charming
the story's getting more and more interesting as well as intriguing,
I'm racking my brain on how Alair's blood will be spilled according to the prophecy...
I'll be waiting for the next update at the edge of my seat.
thank you for such a thrilling story.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
1Nea.MWONDERFUL! WONDERFUL!
It is absolutely charming
the story's getting more and more interesting as well as intriguing,
I'm racking my brain on how Alair's blood will be spilled according to the prophecy...
I'll be waiting for the next update at the edge of my seat.
thank you for such a thrilling story.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
6/2/2013 c6 malachi2223
Awwww... not fair! Alaire doesn't get to enjoy the kiss that much and then slap Keith afterwards. That's just not right.
I can understand Keith's confusion with the prophesy. It doesn't make any sense. O.o
Awwww... not fair! Alaire doesn't get to enjoy the kiss that much and then slap Keith afterwards. That's just not right.
I can understand Keith's confusion with the prophesy. It doesn't make any sense. O.o
4/12/2013 c5 toastninja
This story is wonderful, the whole atmosphere of Eastland is really exotic and amazing. I especially love Keith's attitude for the journey underground. Thank you for posting this! :)
This story is wonderful, the whole atmosphere of Eastland is really exotic and amazing. I especially love Keith's attitude for the journey underground. Thank you for posting this! :)
3/26/2013 c5 Overthinker
Nooo! Cliff hanger! XD You slay me. And, you sneaky little thing you, you posted on the one day I didn't check. lol Anyway, I really like your stuff, especially The King's Groom, and so far, it seems the sequel won't dissappoint.
Nooo! Cliff hanger! XD You slay me. And, you sneaky little thing you, you posted on the one day I didn't check. lol Anyway, I really like your stuff, especially The King's Groom, and so far, it seems the sequel won't dissappoint.