for The Keeper's Captive3/8/2013 c4 Sarawr
I was so exited when I saw this sequel :D I read all four chapters immediately. Can't wait for more! :)
I was so exited when I saw this sequel :D I read all four chapters immediately. Can't wait for more! :)
3/6/2013 c4 Malachi2223
I hope you will be able to get another one up soon, too.
I thought their reactions to being naked together were adorable and Alair taking off without his clothes and his bare ass leading the way were too funny. I could almost see the whole scene.
I'm wondering if this green area is where the energy source lies. It seems to be the obvious conclusion due to all the greenery despite the lack of sunlight needed for photosynthesis.
I'm curious to find out what the entire prophesy says and how it relates to the two men.
And some hot monkey jungle sex wouldn't be unwelcome at all! LMAO! ;-)
I hope you will be able to get another one up soon, too.
I thought their reactions to being naked together were adorable and Alair taking off without his clothes and his bare ass leading the way were too funny. I could almost see the whole scene.
I'm wondering if this green area is where the energy source lies. It seems to be the obvious conclusion due to all the greenery despite the lack of sunlight needed for photosynthesis.
I'm curious to find out what the entire prophesy says and how it relates to the two men.
And some hot monkey jungle sex wouldn't be unwelcome at all! LMAO! ;-)
3/6/2013 c4 Guest
i love it
i love it
3/5/2013 c4 Lovecupid
I can't wait to read more. I would also like to hear the entire prophecy. Keep up the great work.
I can't wait to read more. I would also like to hear the entire prophecy. Keep up the great work.
3/3/2013 c3 Guest
wow i did not see that chapter!
wow i did not see that chapter!
2/22/2013 c2 
5Shikokudarkstar
I rather enjoy the head-knocking that has began between Keith and Alair. It alrealy brings a smile to my face. However there wasn't much detail as to what Keith looked like eyes or hair wise. I might have missed it though. Anyway, as always I find myself enjoying watching your stories unfold. I hope you update soon.
Happy Writing,
Shik
5ShikokudarkstarI rather enjoy the head-knocking that has began between Keith and Alair. It alrealy brings a smile to my face. However there wasn't much detail as to what Keith looked like eyes or hair wise. I might have missed it though. Anyway, as always I find myself enjoying watching your stories unfold. I hope you update soon.
Happy Writing,
Shik
2/15/2013 c2 Malachi2223
That was great. Poor Keith, I feel bad for him, but at the same time I really want to see him knocked down a peg or two. He was really rude to King Logan and even though he was upset by Alair's actions his attitude towards the King was uncalled for. It'll be interesting to see how karma comes round to bite him on the ass. LOL! :D
I'm looking forward to more, thanks for posting this chapter. ;-)
That was great. Poor Keith, I feel bad for him, but at the same time I really want to see him knocked down a peg or two. He was really rude to King Logan and even though he was upset by Alair's actions his attitude towards the King was uncalled for. It'll be interesting to see how karma comes round to bite him on the ass. LOL! :D
I'm looking forward to more, thanks for posting this chapter. ;-)
2/10/2013 c1 Malachi2223
Ah man, I thought this was finished! Damn. I hate being stuck waiting for chapters to be posted. Do you have a set schedule that you'll be posting the chapters? I really hope it won't be long intervals in between chapters. I forget what I've already read and wind up lost at the beginning of the new chapters. :/
So far, it's intriguing and I do want to read more. I just finished rereading The King's Groom. I loved it both times. :D I'm looking forward to reading this one too. It's really not far enough along to comment on the characters or plot yet, but I did like Alair's method of getting Keith to follow him. ;-) It will be interesting to see how Keith reacts to Alair once the shock of having a desert in his building wears off. LOL!
Ah man, I thought this was finished! Damn. I hate being stuck waiting for chapters to be posted. Do you have a set schedule that you'll be posting the chapters? I really hope it won't be long intervals in between chapters. I forget what I've already read and wind up lost at the beginning of the new chapters. :/
So far, it's intriguing and I do want to read more. I just finished rereading The King's Groom. I loved it both times. :D I'm looking forward to reading this one too. It's really not far enough along to comment on the characters or plot yet, but I did like Alair's method of getting Keith to follow him. ;-) It will be interesting to see how Keith reacts to Alair once the shock of having a desert in his building wears off. LOL!
1/26/2013 c1 Daneeno
I just finished The King's Groom and couldn't wait to reead this. I wasn't disapointed I love it so much so far.
I just finished The King's Groom and couldn't wait to reead this. I wasn't disapointed I love it so much so far.
1/26/2013 c1 1Yrvin Thornhart
If this is anything like the The King's Groom, then I'm anticipating another joyful ride towards adventure. See you on the next chapter.
1Yrvin ThornhartIf this is anything like the The King's Groom, then I'm anticipating another joyful ride towards adventure. See you on the next chapter.