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3/2/2013 c3 1Bryanna
This chapter bugs me because Tawnee has no idea if her siblings are being abused or not. In her denial, she may be letting her father hurt them, too.

I know she's been through a lot, but it's still a crappy thing for her just assume everything is fine and go on with her life...
2/22/2013 c4 2BrutieBoots
AAAAH THAT WAS AMAZING! EEE! Jeez Benji, just shut up. xD He's hilarious but so annoying! TAWNEE DOESN'T NEED THAT! I love Sebastian, his narration is great. And him and Tawnee are so sweet! I just love them.

I can't wait for more! Especially for Salem, poor Tawnee is not going to be happy. xD And neither will Sebastian. Tehehe. Update soon please or I'm worried for my health, too much Perfect Harmony withdrawal could be fatal. :P

Brutie
2/6/2013 c3 BrutieBoots
This was a fantastic chapter! :3 Honestly. Go Tawnee, no more stripping WOOP! Except I'm sad that Nicolette is staying, but y'know she's got a daughter and everything. And the end! I actually thought her father was going to belt Heidi but somehow the happy family was even more upsetting, more emotional. Well, at least she'll have sexy twins to hang out with soon. xD

I can't wait for more! I loved the chapter. And go you for updating twice in a day! I was pretty happy to wake up to two updates. :D

Brutie
2/3/2013 c2 1Bryanna
Touching chapter. Desiree is very cute!
2/3/2013 c2 2BrutieBoots
THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAZING! OH MY GOD! Seriously! Desiree is just adorable! And Tawnee, remembering her past and staying at the club. It was so sad. ._. Poor girl, I feel so bad for her. I really like that she has Nicolette though, someone to try and support her through this all.

And the last line... the use of the song... It was just perfect. Honestly. Perfect chapter. (:

I can't wait for more of this story, it's just amazing! I didn't think it could get any better, the original was awesome as hell. But you've done it. (: Update soon!

Brutie
1/26/2013 c1 1Bryanna
Wow, this is brilliant. I'm in love with Tawnee's character and it's only the first chapter! Very well done.
1/26/2013 c1 2BrutieBoots
OH MY GOD. THIS. WAS. AMAZING. IT SERIOUSLY WAS AMAZING. I mean the original was amazing but this was JUST AMAZING-ER. BRILLIANT. FANTASTIC. AAAAH!

I feel so bad for Tawnee! It was so emotional, you wrote her perspective just perfectly. :3 And I love that she can just read Sebastian immediately, they're so similar but so different. Just... amazing! xD I really REALLY can't wait for more! (: Please update soon! Please! Please! Please! Please! Please! Okay, that's all. Have a good day. xD

Brute

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