
8/3/2013 c1
10writing-to-fill-the-emptiness
this is gorgeous. just all around gorgeous. and the last line is so powerful. well done! :)
much love
-c-

this is gorgeous. just all around gorgeous. and the last line is so powerful. well done! :)
much love
-c-
6/20/2013 c1
4aria's melody
this is so beautiful. i love the repetition of the line, "this is not romantic, this is not romantic," because there is so much power behind it. it really connects with the final sentence, "you haven't left. and what does that say about you?" amazing job! xx

this is so beautiful. i love the repetition of the line, "this is not romantic, this is not romantic," because there is so much power behind it. it really connects with the final sentence, "you haven't left. and what does that say about you?" amazing job! xx
2/3/2013 c1 baileyandthemonster
gosh, i love this! it's more than perfect, and breaks my heart. it also reminds me slightly of siken, which is even more /more than perfect/ (:
gosh, i love this! it's more than perfect, and breaks my heart. it also reminds me slightly of siken, which is even more /more than perfect/ (: