for The Captive Pirate6/21/2020 c10 Guest
So disapointed that the doctor isn't a guy
So disapointed that the doctor isn't a guy
4/1/2015 c27 
1PenMasterEm
Hi there! I must say that I'm very happy to have stumbled on this story. It has a lot of potential and I actually did enjoy it. I read your Author's Note in the first chapter and couldn't help but wonder if you had a change of heart about filling the gaps of the story. It was a little choppy, almost like a collection of one-shots that could make a heck of a novel. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask if you would let me write the filler parts. I will not change any of what you have written, I just want to add some smoother transitions, anticipation, suspense, and more distinctive personalities and backgrounds. This is completely up to you but I hope you consider! I love editing more than writing originals and I think your story has the ability to surpass the best of the stuff I've read on this website. PM me if you're interested or not :)
1PenMasterEmHi there! I must say that I'm very happy to have stumbled on this story. It has a lot of potential and I actually did enjoy it. I read your Author's Note in the first chapter and couldn't help but wonder if you had a change of heart about filling the gaps of the story. It was a little choppy, almost like a collection of one-shots that could make a heck of a novel. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask if you would let me write the filler parts. I will not change any of what you have written, I just want to add some smoother transitions, anticipation, suspense, and more distinctive personalities and backgrounds. This is completely up to you but I hope you consider! I love editing more than writing originals and I think your story has the ability to surpass the best of the stuff I've read on this website. PM me if you're interested or not :)
3/15/2013 c27 Guest
I love this story! You write very well. Great characters, and a fun plot. Keep up the good work :)
I love this story! You write very well. Great characters, and a fun plot. Keep up the good work :)
3/8/2013 c27 JustAnotherArtist
This was really good. Full of deceit and temptation with a nice twist at the end. Oh i can definitely see why you fell in love with Hanson. Keep up the good work!
This was really good. Full of deceit and temptation with a nice twist at the end. Oh i can definitely see why you fell in love with Hanson. Keep up the good work!
3/5/2013 c27 Joesette
I feel like I have read this before, but, I know I haven't. It's just, so, damn familiar! God. This is just going to bug me now. I still loved this story and forever will.
I feel like I have read this before, but, I know I haven't. It's just, so, damn familiar! God. This is just going to bug me now. I still loved this story and forever will.
2/25/2013 c19 jess lurelock
Eek such a hot bodice ripper! V good
Eek such a hot bodice ripper! V good
2/16/2013 c27 gigi
Hi:)
I've read this in one go:)
It kinda reminded me on a theater play cause it felt like there was some mayor storyline leftouts - I suppose it was deliberate. Like every greedy reader I think it would be even better if chapters were little longer. But all in all I really had fun reading it ;)
Hi:)
I've read this in one go:)
It kinda reminded me on a theater play cause it felt like there was some mayor storyline leftouts - I suppose it was deliberate. Like every greedy reader I think it would be even better if chapters were little longer. But all in all I really had fun reading it ;)
2/10/2013 c27 Ngoc1231
I kinda really love this story! I also love how he had a hidden title. And I really want to know how Tom became a pirate.
Although you did describe Tom well, I am still would sometime have a different vision of what Tom would look like. But that is mostly in my nature, the author might have set out how a character looks, and I'll make adjustments in my own mind haha.
And the back story behind poor Grace. Omg Henry.. deserves all that he gets and then some.
I was glad though when Letitia got her memories back. I like the spunky version of her, and when she came to find Tom after she found out of Henry lying to her. My favorite scene.
Love the story!
*Ngoc1231*
I kinda really love this story! I also love how he had a hidden title. And I really want to know how Tom became a pirate.
Although you did describe Tom well, I am still would sometime have a different vision of what Tom would look like. But that is mostly in my nature, the author might have set out how a character looks, and I'll make adjustments in my own mind haha.
And the back story behind poor Grace. Omg Henry.. deserves all that he gets and then some.
I was glad though when Letitia got her memories back. I like the spunky version of her, and when she came to find Tom after she found out of Henry lying to her. My favorite scene.
Love the story!
*Ngoc1231*
2/8/2013 c27 smrae
Great ending! Really enjoyed this story and I am sad it's over. Hope to see these characters again in the future.
Great ending! Really enjoyed this story and I am sad it's over. Hope to see these characters again in the future.